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Marin meets someone from her past.
Posted by Killjoy364 6 years ago Report
well that's a plan that will end horribly
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Posted by BIGBIG 6 years ago Report
Woho. Hyped for this story
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Posted by Gabriel0813 6 years ago Report
That by far as the be the worst plan to ever try of all plans ever.
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Posted by Sarethas 6 years ago Report
I feel like they are somehow not thinking this through. For example, they have no guarantee if Diana's venom would work, even though they have at least a few deathclaws around to try it on first. >.>
Further than that, they're setting off with no supplies? On what, if I recall correctly, should be a multi-day hike? Beyond even that, the stealth-boy works on sight. How is it supposed to prevent any reasonable predator from smelling her/them?
And to top off this list of problems, why is Diana bringing Amelia along? She's small, weak, and frequently does things that are dangerous! Stomach-diving, for example. :P
Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Oh Amelia is just getting dropped off at Voyla's. As for the rest; it's a bold plan, let's see how it plays out for them! :B
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Posted by Sarethas 6 years ago Report
I completely somehow missed that part of the conversation, that they weren't starting until night. :o That alleviates most of my concerns.
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Also I'm a ditz. Amelia isn't supposed to be going along, I neglected to mention it in the chapter entirely.
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