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So, after a winding and dramatic road, Chapter 3 ends perhaps not the way anyone wanted to. There was opportunity for a happy ending, no one had to be hurt, but somehow everyone got hurt.
I do want to say, though I'm still working on it I do expect chapter 4 to be a little different. I don't want to keep dragging out this same bit, as entertaining as Sap and Lemmy's relationship is. However, this isn't the last we'll see of these two characters and I hope you continue to enjoy this and share it with your friends. All the feedback you've given me has been so much fun to read, you're a bunch of cool gits in the comments, there.
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 6 years ago Report
It has been very fun to read this whole thing. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Posted by UnknownGamer21 6 years ago Report
It's amazing and honorable to read such a great story of love, lose, and luck. Since Lemmy's lucky enough to be kicked out instead of eaten, and slapped instead of eaten. Though, I do hope they end up having a somewhat happy ending
Posted by welp 6 years ago Report
Can’t wait to see this keep going!
Posted by Bowyer2 6 years ago Report
I honestly think that it shows everyone is a monster.
Posted by AeonRaptor 6 years ago Report
This is probably my favorite page so far. Kudos to you! Although I think Lemmy’s a bit too lucky, he’s surviving strike three here.
Posted by anema_sesuna 6 years ago Report
Its all that skank from the diners fault
Posted by Novalori 6 years ago Report
Sap looking scary in that last panel, looks really good tho. Honestly a bit surprised Norm is actually..dead- but he kinda had it coming. Interested to see if Lemmy ends up the same way.
Posted by walkingbyself 6 years ago Report
For Lemmy, "Stop it. Get some help."
If Lemmy had any sense, at all, he would change his nam and phone number and leave the city or state he is living in and hope to god he never enconuters Sap again.
Then again, he has shown an inability to learn from his fuck ups and keeps making worse and worse mistakes. So if he does answer and come to her again and ends up as her food it's his own damn fault.
I feel sorry for Sap that she has to put up with this mouse who just refuses to learn that his words and actions do have consequences. Consequences which he has been lucky to avoid thus far, but it seems his luck might run out sooner rather then later. I can only hope the punishment is suitable for the heartache he's caused.
Posted by UnknownGamer21 6 years ago Report
To be fair, if you ask me. Sap appeared to nearly break Lemmy mentally when she said "If you don't want me to eat rodents then don't feed them to me" while he said in page 56 that he sent his friend Norm to come and give her chocolates, which she replies with "You sent me chocolates?" Which, if you ask me. Sounds like she hasn't fully understood what's happening... So it's... kinda both of their faults here for the heartache
Posted by randomnames 6 years ago Report
As someone who joined since page 1 I can't wait for chapter 4. Keep up the good work!
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
Thank you for putting up with it all!
Posted by necryel 6 years ago Report
You write a compelling story. While most simply romanticize pred-prey relationships, you tackle the awkwardness, the difficulties, the prejudices and misunderstandings that might arise.
You flip the table entirely by reversing commonly accepted notions. Instead of the prey, you show us the vulnerabilities of the predator and a prey who can hurt and wound so easily without realizing.
Your art style, with its simplicity never over complicates the images, never distracts from the emotion of the moment, instead it forces us to focus on the expressions, the poses; it distills the emotions and messages the characters are conveying and makes them impossible to misinterpret.
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
I'm very glad you see it all that way! Sometimes I have ideas in my head but I can never know for sure if they'll come across on paper.
Posted by Assimilation 6 years ago Report
Your storytelling skill is incredible, and I feel lucky to have stumbled across it a few weeks ago.
u da bes
Posted by whatisthissheet 6 years ago Report
Oh, fuck.
He did deserve it thouh.
Kinda hot how his friend, or whatever is left of him, is still in there.
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
This chapter turned out really nicely! That last panel is particularly nice; plus I always like the tags.
I've been enjoying this series. Everybody has such a well-defined personality, and it all just flows so naturally. Looking forward to chapter four.
Posted by essedess 6 years ago Report
If he decides to keep pursuing this relationship he should feed the girl that forced herself on him in the closet to her next.
Posted by FKBone 6 years ago Report
After i stumbled over Page 11 on accident i enjoyed every new page you drew and uploaded, a big thanks from me for the interesting and rather amusing Story, In my oppinion you nailed the pred Prey realtionship very well, in terms on how it normaly would work out, the last few pages were a blast, <.< i couldnt really wait for the next one to be uploaded so during this time i kept refreshing time by time in hope a new one would show up. I look Forward to see much more from you and your fantasic stories and drawings. ^^
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
For some reason, I'm still hoping they make up and get together again.
Posted by Spider8Fiend 6 years ago Report
Oooh, spooky snake eyes~<3 This whole comic is now worth it to have that shot with all the context to make it truly terrifying.
Posted by UnknownGamer21 6 years ago Report
I just thought of something... From the look on Lemmy's face, and how he yelled at the one he loves the most "YOU REALLY ARE A MONSTER!!" Sap might have broken him mentally, I wonder if that'll mean anything
Posted by ChaCheeryMousie 6 years ago Report
This mouse has played with fire far too many times. I’m usually on a mouse’s side when it comes to stories, but shucks Lemmy is really hard to cheer for. I’m suprised Sap was willing to let him back in after the cafe fiasco.
Posted by Sergit 6 years ago Report
This has been a fun ride so far! Saph looks very cool in this panel!
Lemmy looks just pitiful, though. X3
Posted by JakuArts 6 years ago Report
While uncomfortable, thank you for addressing some real honest life issues here. You have managed to portray a very emotional story filled with characters that have quite a substantial amount of depth. Your style has become cleaner and more exprrssonate as you progressed, and while I am not the biggest fan of that mouse, please please please continue writing a story about Sap.
She’s got a lot of narrative meat left in her character and I can only hope that you decide to continue bringing her to life. You’ve made me a fan. Thank you! Your comic is gorgeous!!
Posted by YummyLady 6 years ago Report
I used to like Sap but now i just think she's an unreasonable bitch
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
Yeah, she’s really sensitive and doesn’t handle it very well.
Posted by SeekGr 6 years ago Report
Well... That happened xD
Can't wait for the next Chapter!
Posted by IsistheKitsune 5 years ago Report
Such a sad ending.
Will things change for the better?
Posted by BSGreyM 5 years ago Report
Probably not. Maybe. Looking forward to getting my computer back so I can get back to work though.