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the intruder part 1 By ca50

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As I got some time, I decided to write some.
I hope you enjoy

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b300mussolini

Posted by b300mussolini 4 days ago

good i have read quite a few half finished stories and stories written while the author was drunk beyond all, and i was wondering which this was? sorry if this sounds mean but i could not follow this story at all. if anything it feels more like a writing guild for a story then a story in all honesty.

girl was working, girl goes to beach with family, girl finds a rock, family events happen, rock goes missing, tentacle?, pillow becomes a person and gets dragged into girls ass?

and if you doubt this here is a direct qoute
"Little by little Lara felt her ass widen, and the more progress the pillow made, the more Lara screamed. In a few minutes half of him was already inside Lara. "

you have the potential for a story here you just need to slow down and add more to the scenes

ca50

Posted by ca50 4 days ago

sorry, due to some factors I have been quite busy these days, with had not posted anything a few days I wrote a quick text. but probably from the end of next week I'll have a break and create something more elaborate.
Thank you for your review