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Tryouts By ouphe

Uploaded: 8 months ago

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Mr. Ferriday is in the market for a new assistant.

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Stanku

Posted by Stanku 8 months ago

A very neat piece with a great flow and functional descriptions. There's really nothing extraneous here that I can see, everything fits in nicely from the foreshadowing start to a climatic end; in short, a perfect vore scene.

This is the first story I've read from you, so I can't say if you have any longer ones, but one clear way you could improve this is fleshing out the characters' personalities more, which would mean writing a longer fic with a more intricate plot. But even with such little space available you managed gracefully to induce some spirit into the characters, which is one of the hardest things to do in writing.

Looking forward to reading more from you! Especially if that included more blowjobs from furs...

ouphe

Posted by ouphe 7 months ago

Thank you for your constructive reply! Based off that last line, you'll like some of my other writing, and I plan to have some more with Silvy and Cassie. Mr. Ferriday is already a recurring character.

Stanku

Posted by Stanku 7 months ago

I do like me a big bad wolf from time to time~