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I'm sorry for the abrupt ending and the long absence. I've had a bit of writers block and trouble with motivation.
Motivation for the suit is from 'Meteor vs Eroero suit'.
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Posted by Demihunger 6 years ago Report
Well that's an interesting take. So how will she carry her daily life while having that suit on?
Posted by Nothinggood 6 years ago Report
That at the moment will remain to be seen!
I hope you enjoyed it!
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Good story, love the idea for that collar.
Posted by Nothinggood 6 years ago Report
Thankyou so much! I'm glad you think so!
Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report
Ooh, that’s an interesting premise, I look forward to seeing where you go with this!
One minor critique - I strongly suggest reformatting this into paragraphs, rather than a solid block of text, the formatting makes it a lot harder to read.
Posted by Nothinggood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Always thrilled to hear feedback from you.
Yeah, I seem to have quite a but of trouble with formatting cause I generally write on my phone, and the app I write with is honestly crap.
I'll try again with whatever I write next and see if I can make it easier to read. :)