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Twilight Sparkle has a particular student who performs poorly in her classes; having attempted all of her normal methods, she's forced to take matters to give the colt a more hooves on experience in hopes that he finally retains some of the material.
This is a bit of a departure from my preferences in terms of disposal and such, but I just wanted to mess around a bit and try other things to improve.
Posted by abstractCourier 5 years ago Report
Whew, full-tour yes please!
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Posted by Tricks 5 years ago Report
Hopefully you enjoyed it; it's not my usual medium but definitely something I don't mind doing from time to time.
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Posted by dosdose 5 years ago Report
Neat story, I did enjoy how descriptive things were from both the pred and prey perspectives. Do you plan to have a continuation of this where Twilight decides to make it more realistic?
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Posted by Tricks 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! I didn't have any specific plans for a continuation, since it's outside of the stuff I usually do and was more of an experiment for me; what do you mean by more realistic, though?
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Posted by dosdose 5 years ago Report
Just remarking on the part where Twilight considers that if the grades don't improve that she might put him through more realistic conditions. Which probably won't be as nice as his first run through. Where her body doesn't really play as nicely with him as it did before.
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Posted by Tricks 5 years ago Report
Aaah... well I hadn't really planned on any sequels, unfortunately; so nothing's really in the works for something like that.
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