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Introducing the second OC needed for the next chapter of the forgotten one. Let's just say he runs into a bunch of nurse ponies having a picnic and vore ensues.
I will post a concept sketch from when I was designing him so you can see why I have to write, the shakes make it way to hard for me to draw anything really coherent, and my handwriting ain't much better.
it also gives you a basic idea of how my mind works and whats in the stack of unwritten stories, as its mostly just chicken scratch notes and weird images, like I have seen a slender man or something.
Going to slow my roll for the next few days as I have my birthday weekend, and it's correlating with me finishing my time at uni so I am going to get smashed. Then when I return I will have a little collab planned with Genly, so that should be fun, no spoilers but it's going to be a pretty unique pred.
after that, we should be business as usual.
spellchecked 05:52 21/07/2018
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Posted by PonyThroat 5 years ago Report
Not much of a figure of kindness.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
maybe fluttershy could change the situation, her and the crocodile troll may cross paths in the near future.
Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
Had to find more of this story after discovering the later bit. Great opening mass vore scene of the unsuspecting Nurse Mares. Thought the 'internals' were pretty good though surprised the ponies weren't churned more intensely, with the surviving ones fairly safe on the pile of deceased one. I would have though a massive peristaltic wave would send them all topsy turvy and change the environment at least a couple times a minute. Thought the mare eating mare stuff spoiled it a bit, but already aware of it from the other chapter. Are there 'croc trolls' in the official MLP universe of is this your invention? I did notice one typo: "and began to scarper back to his lair,(scamper). Thanks for sharing!
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
Croc trolls are my little invention, i wanted a mlp oc, so i made one that was super edgy.
scarper is a word it means to flee or run away.
all ponies who gnarle ate were alive at the time this story chapter ends. it was like a wave of death in there and the were swimming against each other and the stomach.