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Friendly competition - The next day By Hozomat -- Report

After the terrible incident with her friend Ellie, Sophie wakes up the next day and faces unexpected consequences...
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So...Yeah, that ending was rather unexpected I think. I decided to give Meriel a rework, because I realized that 'Meriel's hunt' wasn't very popular, for various reasons that I may understand. I really wanted to keep her around because I have plans for her, but for her comeback, I decided to get rid of that tattoo story, because, let's face it, everyone -including me- would have lost count eventually.
Anyway, enjoy !

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deletbn26026

Posted by deletbn26026 3 years ago Report

I’m always blown away by your stories!!! You’re so descriptive it’s just too great! Am looking forward to more^^ and am inspired to write my own vore story now.

Hozomat

Posted by Hozomat 3 years ago Report

Thank you ! I'm actually flattered to have inspired you (though writing wouldn't fit with your name :p) !
I personally believe that if there's a detail that matters to me, then I should describe it. Details are everything ! :)

deletbn26026

Posted by deletbn26026 3 years ago Report

I couldn’t agree more without details in a story it takes out feeling and makes it feel like a robot in a way, and I’ll have to do something about my name d:{

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 3 years ago Report

Amazing story loved it !

Hozomat

Posted by Hozomat 3 years ago Report

Thanks !

Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report

:/ awwwwww. I really did like Sophie. She wasn't cruel, evil, or just plain mean. Dammit :/

Hozomat

Posted by Hozomat 3 years ago Report

I also prefer preys who deserve being eaten, but sometimes I like to vary things a little bit with a tragedy. Besides, it makes Meriel even more cruel that way :)
Hope you still enjoyed it !

Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report

Yep, did enjoy it all the way until she got eaten at the end :P

Bright

Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report

I guess Sophie isn't gonna be a recurring character.

Hozomat

Posted by Hozomat 3 years ago Report

Sadly, no.