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Doctors Notice By doomfister

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James returns from a trip to Ibiza, just me playing around with a concept from a gluttonous pred, as what happens if the indigestables don't leave through the back door.

Just me playing around with a random concept, something I have never seen before and felt like putting to paper. so this is probably not my best work, but it was something that was bugging me until I wrote it, and I didn't have anything in the immediate future that could scratch this itch.

as per usual if you like what you see, let me know. This is important as it lets me know, that way I can get a pulse on what people are reading my stuff for.

spell checked 05:04 21/07/2018

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Genly

Posted by Genly 5 months ago

Nice one! I love the idea of guy using his holiday as an excuse to eat loads of girls. One a day is pretty impressive~

Also, I thought the cut from Helen's realization straight to James with a full gut was nice. Clearly, her struggles weren't even worth a mention! Only shame is that we didn't see him let those gals back out.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 months ago

glad you liked it, this is going to act as a capstone story, as i have a few planned involving his adventures in the med resort of Ibiza, that in time will materialise.

just depends on what i feel like writing, but be sure the future will always hold many more girls becoming greasy turds.

Cheezycake

Posted by Cheezycake 4 months ago

This is probaby one of the best M/F stories I've read. Would love to see a sequel with Amy, or a prequel in Ibiza. Great stuff

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 4 months ago

glad you liked it, i will probably do more in this series in the future, its just when i feel like doing m/f.