Listen, I’m sure you have a lot of talent and potential, but for now, your art style is WAY to cluttered. The rough lines seem lazy, and the whole thing seems rushed. The glare and glitter covering the screen fail to cover the sloppy linework. I’ve noticed this with a lot of your art, and I recommend using construction lines. It really helps with understanding the anatomy. I also recommend watching a youtuber who goes by solar sands. He is a great critic and you could really improve by watching him.
I wasnt exactly sure how to reply to this, as im sorta shy and sensitive, but i gained up a bit of courage to sorta reply. As far as my Awareness on this subject, i am already aware my art needs work, and am currently Trying to make improvments on my work. This happens to be an older work of mine, and at the time when i drew this, this was actually a step up from some of the works prior to this, Tho That being said, My current works, need improvment, and i promise you im not rushing them, Its more of a lack of understanding Of how to draw, Rather than a rushed job or being lazy. But that being said, I will go ahead and check this Solar sands guy out. a week ago, Before you messaged me , i was already talking to another person who guding me twoards improving as well. I am trying my best to improve, so i will try to keep this in mind as well,
thank you for the advice,
Posted by TheNamesJackson 5 years ago Report
Listen, I’m sure you have a lot of talent and potential, but for now, your art style is WAY to cluttered. The rough lines seem lazy, and the whole thing seems rushed. The glare and glitter covering the screen fail to cover the sloppy linework. I’ve noticed this with a lot of your art, and I recommend using construction lines. It really helps with understanding the anatomy. I also recommend watching a youtuber who goes by solar sands. He is a great critic and you could really improve by watching him.
Posted by onlydugetisaduel 5 years ago Report
I wasnt exactly sure how to reply to this, as im sorta shy and sensitive, but i gained up a bit of courage to sorta reply. As far as my Awareness on this subject, i am already aware my art needs work, and am currently Trying to make improvments on my work. This happens to be an older work of mine, and at the time when i drew this, this was actually a step up from some of the works prior to this, Tho That being said, My current works, need improvment, and i promise you im not rushing them, Its more of a lack of understanding Of how to draw, Rather than a rushed job or being lazy. But that being said, I will go ahead and check this Solar sands guy out. a week ago, Before you messaged me , i was already talking to another person who guding me twoards improving as well. I am trying my best to improve, so i will try to keep this in mind as well,
thank you for the advice,
Posted by Eka 5 years ago Report
Don't worry too much about it. Your work is fine. I like to compliment that you don't make excuse about it. That is really all that is needed.
Posted by onlydugetisaduel 5 years ago Report
thank you so much eka! <3