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Okay so the way I got this idea is most of my adult life I have believed that snakes by nature's design are incapable of empathizing or having attachment to other living things. Something my girlfriend strongly disagrees with. Regardless if that be the case, I though to me self if that was the case, what if I did a scenario where the was a special snake that didn't feel for and have attachment to other's and because she is a snake no creature would talk to her out of fear. Then one day a humen stumbles into her midst, and she seizes the chance to end her loneliness once and for all, even if the human doesn't cooperate with this idea. And so this story was born. Hope you guys like it, and please favorite and comment if you do.
(Side note) in the snakes name the I is pronounced as ee, like Athina.

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JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

Sounds like we can expect to see a sequel. I wonder how Jack will react to waking up in her stomach.

More-Vore

Posted by More-Vore 3 years ago Report

Honestly it didn't occur to me to make a sequel till you suggested it, not sure where to go from her with this particular narrative, but I will try to think of something.

SpiceWeasel

Posted by SpiceWeasel 3 years ago Report

Neat scenario, I'd like to see more.

More-Vore

Posted by More-Vore 3 years ago Report

Well there was this idea I had before this one that kind of inspired it, both were based of of Kaa in the live action jungle book. The other idea also takes place in south America where a kid on vacation gets lost in the wilderness and encounters a plumed serpent of myth like Quetzalcoatl, only it looks more like the wind serpents form world of Warcraft

SpiceWeasel

Posted by SpiceWeasel 3 years ago Report

I guess I was thinking more along the lines of a sequel to this one. If it's only endosoma and non-fatal, it seems like these characters have potential.