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Twilight's new to being a predator. Rainbow's new to being a prey. Pinkie helps them both come out of their shells.
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Posted by Withania 5 years ago Report
Love the way Rainbow tried to take control, and then just gets entirely out-dommed by Pinkie. Great fic! <3
Posted by 48th agent 5 years ago Report
Where would poor Rainbow be without an experienced helping hand? hehe
And thanks, really appreciate it!
Posted by Mcleod 5 years ago Report
I must admit, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's very rare for me to enjoy the characters of MLP anthropomorphized, but you really did them justice in this iteration.
You've really improved your writing skills over the years from when I first saw your stories appear on this site (and the other places you posted them to). I'll be waiting for your future posts with anticipation.
I'm interested in knowing whether you plan on making this into a series or if it's merely a one-shot.
Posted by 48th agent 5 years ago Report
You're very kind in saying that, and I feel flattered to hear all this. Thank you very much for the kind words, I hope I won't let you down!
I haven't really thought about a series on this, but I guess I can think about it. What did you have in mind, Pinkie just feeding more folks to the new glutton?
Posted by Firenhooves 5 years ago Report
Damn! I've read this twice. I would have voted for your story as first place in the vore jam if I had read it in time. Your story should have won it! I'm swapping my vote from Mr. Left to you 48th agent.
Posted by 48th agent 5 years ago Report
I was a little late with the submission, so it's alright dude hehe
But dang, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it man!