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(Previously named "The 18th Birthday Accident")
Continuation of the story - things are starting to get interesting!
Again, since this is *supposed* to be a quick one, minimal proofreading done.
I know I said two chapters. Looks like it'll be three. I'm posting this as there's actually more done, but it's incomplete and enough for a final chapter on its own! Apparently I suck at *short* stories.
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Posted by GeneralUrist 5 years ago Report
Well this is interesting, I wonder what the finale will be? Aside from Full Tour, not sure what opportunities remain.
I suck at 'short' stories as well. Most things I write end up several times longer than intended.
Posted by Gershwin 5 years ago Report
It may be short than this chapter, or it least I hope it is! I get too into the writing and just do too much. I need to get this finished so I can do more of my main story!!
Posted by MechaSharkZilla 5 years ago Report
That was... Pretty amazing. Now I just need to wait and see if the twist I'm expecting in part 3 comes to fruition.
Posted by Gershwin 5 years ago Report
Glad you liked it :) a twist you say? Nooooo idea what you could possibly be talking about. (It turns out Samantha is Ben, his best friend is a 30 something woman, a mistress of disguise!)
Posted by MechaSharkZilla 5 years ago Report
And the receptionist? Albert Einstein.