I like it alot, the premise and the joy she has at growing. It does seem to cut off somewhat suddenly, it didn't really feel like an ending. Still nice.
I got impatient with myself for this one. I wanted to post it, yet i knew it was not 100% complete. I have a part 2 in the works. It starts up exactly where that one left off. However I'm not sure what is going to happen, My writing styles have changed a lot since I first wrote this one.
I was going for more of a joy type thing with her. I wanted her to really enjoying expanding and getting larger. :D
Thanks for reading AND commenting. :) It means a lot.
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Posted by DancingQueen6281 17 years ago Report
I like it alot, the premise and the joy she has at growing. It does seem to cut off somewhat suddenly, it didn't really feel like an ending. Still nice.
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
I got impatient with myself for this one. I wanted to post it, yet i knew it was not 100% complete. I have a part 2 in the works. It starts up exactly where that one left off. However I'm not sure what is going to happen, My writing styles have changed a lot since I first wrote this one.
I was going for more of a joy type thing with her. I wanted her to really enjoying expanding and getting larger. :D
Thanks for reading AND commenting. :) It means a lot.