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A trip through the Nile By thevorisheevee

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Welcome to our first story, both on this site and in the Meeting Vel series! This may not be the greatest story ever but I hope it is still enjoyable! The next story hopefully won't be this down in the dumps. (Pun intended)

Constructive comments highly encouraged! We need all the support we can get!

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Lewdghost

Posted by Lewdghost 2 months ago

You say you want constructive comments so here's one for you. Please for the love of god change either the page's background or the text(not in the story, but you commentary and everything) so that it's easier to read the things you wrote

thevorisheevee

Posted by thevorisheevee 2 months ago

Alright X3 I can see that it is a bit difficult to read. Tell me if this has made it any better!

Lewdghost

Posted by Lewdghost 1 month ago

much better, haven't checked my messages since the above post so that's why the feedback took so long.