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Seven teens are at the mall to celebrate their graduation. But, the mall holds a dark secret. Will they make it out of the mall outside of diapers? Read and find out.
Huge shoutout to Groblek for helping me edit and tweek this. You're the best man.
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Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
Awesome story!
Posted by wiseguy288 5 years ago Report
Thanks! It took some work, but I'm super proud of it ^_^
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
You’ve left a few underscores in the story though
Posted by Virgo13 5 years ago Report
Yuki is a Japanese name not Chinese but otherwise good story ^^
Posted by wiseguy288 5 years ago Report
Eeyeah, I realized that a little too late. Sorry ^^;
And thanks X3
Posted by Virgo13 5 years ago Report
Haha I'm sorry too probably didn't need to mention it I just have a Japanese best friend and she's trained me very heavily in cultural correctness xD
Posted by wiseguy288 5 years ago Report
Gotcha, no worries
Posted by Groblek 5 years ago Report
This is a really fun story, I’m glad I was able to help you polish up your rough draft. I think the final version turned out really well. Feel free to hit me up for advice or brainstorming again anytime.
Posted by wiseguy288 5 years ago Report
Absolutely! Thanks again man!
Posted by Ruvikjas 5 years ago Report
Awsome work.
Posted by wiseguy288 5 years ago Report
Thank ya kindly