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This entry takes place on the same day as Part 9, around the time that the timeskip in Chapter 12 of Volume 3 of RWBY would be happening if the timeline was following it's intended course, and features a double event. First, we have street thief Emerald Sustrai as the prey of bandit maiden Raven Branwen, followed by Faunus girl turned slime Velvet Scarlatina, as the prey of an unwitting Nora Valkyrie.
This part was brought to you as a special milestone story, with a more idea based system for people to vote on their own combos in the comments. Thanks to SwordkingX5 for the idea of Raven voring Emerald, and CzarSchnee for Nora voring Emerald, as well as Nora being at the gym.
Extra thanks to tankbuster626 for proof-reading this.
FOR THIS PART ONWARD, THE ORIGINAL POLL-STYLE VOTING IS BACK.
Below are 3 polls, designed to let you, the reader, vote for who's to be the next predator, prey, and what vore type occurs.
You may note the limited number of characters, which is due to there being limited slots in the poll creator, meaning i've kept it to who'd be around logically in the present time frame, and cut out characters who are no longer available (i.e. Weiss has been eaten, so isn't around anymore as an option) or don't have enough known about them for them to be a prime voting choice. That said, if you don't see a character (or a vore type) you want to vote for, mention them in the comments, and I may fit them into the next poll.
Another note. With Volume 6 beginning to appear on the horizon, it is worth reiterating a previous point. Any characters who are introduced in the coming episodes will be unavailable here until the volume is over.
IMPORTANT NOTE: You will have to log in to Straw Poll with an account to vote. I really hate to do this, and I expect it to lower the number of people willing to vote, but it was necessary after a couple of people decided to be unfair and spoof their IPs to vote certain outcomes to the top (by the way, I did the maths, and Ruby would have won by the legit votes in those polls anyway, hence her being the pred in the part that followed).
THIS POLL IS NOW CLOSED, BUT THE RESULTS WILL BE KEPT HERE FOR PROSPERITY.
Vote for Part 11's Pred: Winter 7, Penny 6, Ren 1, Neon 1
Vote for Part 11's Prey: Mercury 5, Winter 4, Ciel 2, Neon 2, Cardin 1, Salem 1
Vote for Part 11's Vore Type: Unbirth 7, Anal 2, Cock 2, Thigh 2, Cleavage 1, Navel/Belly 1
Voting will close 48 hours from posting, so at around 5:30pm British time on Thursday (August 9th).
There's a been a minor amendment to the rules below, plus a little reorganizing for ease of reading, but they're otherwise the same.
GUIDELINES
Vote Results:
- If 2 prey candidates are joint 1st in votes, they both get eaten.
- If 2 pred candidates are joint 1st in votes, only one gets the prey (decided via coin flip), unless there's 2 joint 1st prey, in which case they get one each.
- If a candidate gets the most votes for both pred and prey, pred takes precedence, with the 2nd most voted prey candidate becoming the prey. That said, if there's both 2 pred and 2 prey, the candidate who's both can be a pred, then become prey afterward.
- If 2 vore types are joint 1st, and there's only one prey voted in, which occurs is decided via coin flip.
- In the rarity that any of the above have 3+ things joint 1st, the outcome is decided via digital dice.
- If something wins a vote, it gets temporarily removed as an option for the next part. If it's then voted for the next time it's available, it'll be removed for the next two polls, and so on.
- If Self Vore wins, the prey vote will be used for the part after, and the pred will eat themselves, the 2nd most popular type becoming the method.
- If a user votes for Other Vore, they should leave a comment on the part describing a type not already an option (one per user). If Other Vore wins, one of the suggestions will be selected at random, and all listed suggestions (or at least the workable ones) will be recycled for future polls.
Story Outcomes:
- If the pred and prey canonically have a good relationship, the prey's consciousness becomes a voice in the pred's head, the vore itself having a chance of being willing. Also, if the pair, due to canon or in-story events, are close enough, the pred may be able to let the prey 'take the wheel'.
- If the pred and prey canonically have a bad or non-relationship, there won't be any kind of voice, the prey instead becoming a small part of the pred's mind, without any consciousness of their own.
- The more someone vores, the more they'll crave it, as the feeling is addictive. At first, as Glynda has in needing to dispose of Cinder, they'll justify it logically (Phase 1). After a while, this will become less believable and more like excuses (Phase 2, starts after 3-4 meals, really kicks in around 7) with the pred eventually only convincing themselves (Phase 3, noticeable around 12), until they just openly admit to craving vore (Phase 4, full onset starts at about 20). Fundamentally, though this only happens after lots of vore, it takes as long/short a time as works for the story, varying between characters based on specific factors.
- There's also a Phase 5 (100 mark), but that isn't important for the time being...
In the mean time, thank you for reading, and I wish you well.
-moonpunch101
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Posted by tankbuster626 5 years ago Report
*Gives thumbs up*
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
:D
Posted by SwordkingX5 5 years ago Report
Yay some Raven vore.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
I hope I did your suggestion justice. :)
Posted by SwordkingX5 5 years ago Report
I liked it.
Just need to fight so she stays off the prey list.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Yep. Luckily, she's out until the next poll, so you don't need to worry about that for now.
Posted by SwordkingX5 5 years ago Report
Ye for now.
Till next time where everyone votes for her to be eaten by Ruby.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Either her or Winter, and given the way the votes are going so far, Winter won't be in the next one.
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
Well damn, so much stuff happened. I thought Cooc and Velet would have been gone and ... she should have grown much bigger breasts and ass.
ANd also Emerald is gone? i was really hoping her to get Torchwic.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Well, this is how the votes were best interpreted, so I just went for it.
Coco and Velvet stuck around because they're interpreted here as being quite good friends with RWBY and JNPR, whilst it only being Nora's chest that grew and not by lots was what worked for the story. Wanted it to be unclear so she'd be a little confused.
There's still Mercury left to free Torchwick.
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
true but also! i just thought of something. Mercury getting turned into a girl. i think that would be fun. Also! Reading your story really makes me wish you were willing to do a colab with me.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
As a fan of TG, I can see the appeal of turning Merc into a girl, but I don't think I could fit it in.
And again, sorry about turning you down on the collab offer, but it would be unfair on you to have wait for nothing. Maybe one day, if I somehow get myself organised.
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
well i could havev done the writing as i said. you would collab with me on the plot. :)
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Maybe. Might give that one some thought.
On a seperate note, just because i'm curious, what did you vote for?
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
Wanted Winter to be pred and some unbirthing. And Mercury as the prey.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
I meant the current poll, not the last one. :P
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
no those were the current polls.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Ah. Sorry, must be getting my wires crossed. Thought you wrote something else.
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
no problem!
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Also, if you really want to discuss some story ideas, PM me. Even if it's just some rough working out, it could be interesting.
Posted by Nightmare49 5 years ago Report
I will have to do that. i got one in mind.
Posted by MoonColva90 5 years ago Report
Interesting, wasn't Ruby supposed to be available to vote this time (it's entirely possibe ive miscounted)?
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Originally yes, but I miscounted things. She'll be in the next poll. :P
Posted by cgarcia0825 5 years ago Report
Is Ruby going to eat Salem
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Nope.
Posted by Flame14 5 years ago Report
Poor Velvet. Was really hoping to see her get another meal or at least stick around for awhile longer but I guess that’s not going to happen. And so with that all of my favorite girls have been eaten.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Who were your other favorites, out of interest?
Posted by Flame14 5 years ago Report
Velvet, Pyrrha and Yang/Coco fighting for third place.
Posted by moonpunch101 5 years ago Report
Ah. Sorry, then. The vote spoke.