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Size Isn't A Big Deal 20: Swap By marloweny -- Report

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The second half of the story I recently posted. Wendy and Meeta are once again left to their own devices and get up to some mystical mischief.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report

Ooh, fun! Having those two swap bodies is a fun concept. I particularly liked Meeta’s “Are you always this sensitive?” And the subsequent realization of just why Wendy’s auite so focused on sex all the time.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 1 year ago Report

It was fun. The body swap was a request. Seems like requests often turn out well.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report

Since I’ve definitely enjoyed the stories you’ve done from my requests, I certainly can’t argue with that. :)

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 1 year ago Report

Meeta, Wendy, and the suit all have the potential for some interesting one shot scenarios, but I think Tammer and Nectica's quest for redemption is of more interest to me, at the moment. The recent teasers about Tammer's own dark past have left me quite currious, so I hope there is still more to come.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 1 year ago Report

Wow. I'd always thought Tammer was the "ugh, THIS guy is getting a chapter" character of the story.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 1 year ago Report

Well it depends, if all you want is an over the top sex scene, Wendy is obviously the most likely to instigate that. But if you want some interesting character development, it helps to keep things a little more serious. All of the characters have had some character development at this point, but in part because Tammer has been absent for a good part of the story, he's not seen quite as much.

I can enjoy a one-shot sort of story without much investment into the characters, but this many chapters in I'm actually pretty interested in who these people are, and what motivates them to act the way they do. The body swap in this chapter was actually really insightful that way, but it didn't leave as much in the way of unanswered questions, like Tammer's efforts to help Nectica do.

Thinking about it a little more now though, how the body swap affects Meeta and Wendy's relationship moving forward will be interesting to see as well. The suit is also still a bit of an unknown to me. I know it's kind of becoming a part of the group, and it's place in the sex scenes is fairly obvious, but I'm not quite sure how it fits in on the longer term relationship side of things.

It's a little bit too advanced for me to look at it as an object or a tool, and a little bit too simple for me to see it as a real character. In that way it kind of falls into a bit of an uncanny valley for me, and so I'm not quite comfortable with it being around yet. In the end, I guess I'd say maybe don't read too much into my overthinking all of this. I'll remain interested to read what comes next, whatever it is.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 1 year ago Report

Trust me, I love when people think about my stuff. Comments like this motivate me to really dive into plot and character. I haven't quite decided where I'm going with Tammer and Nectica, but they're going somewhere. That is to say, there's going to be a resolution and development of their arc. Malivia, I think, is going to be downright irredeemable, but I'm not sure if/how she'll get her comeuppance. As for the suit, I'd like to find some way to have its intelligence creep up to full "character" level, while probably still remaining mute. It's definitely headed in that direction, what with it being relatively obedient when they're keeping an eye on it.

C107galaxytachyon

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner: my grandfather's funeral really put a dent in my free time in the past few months.

Well, that, and I kinda getting lost binging myself on your backcatalog of works (they fantastic, by the way).

In case you're wondering, I'm the one who originally penned the request for this piece, and I've gotta say: this truly is impressive.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 1 year ago Report

Sorry to hear about your grandfather. I'm glad you've been enjoying my stuff!

C107galaxytachyon

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

Yep! Sure have! Still, I can't help but feel it's a big shame fans aren't gifting you more artwork of these lofty scenarios.

DanielK108

Posted by DanielK108 4 months ago Report

Part 21?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 months ago Report

It's hard for me to get back to this stuff ever since I started doing a Patreon. LIttle short, non-canon things are doable, but continuing stories, not so much. Too much continuity to drag with me.

DanielK108

Posted by DanielK108 4 months ago Report

Oh... :(

DanielK108

Posted by DanielK108 4 months ago Report

Oh good... I read all... it's fantastick!
Marloweny, please you must contninuation.
Wendy and Meta (and Suit) is nice fabular. I wait a bet play.
Tammer, Malive and Netica is interesting story. Nimpf Netica is nice ideas. Please, continuation!

(Sorry, I'm not write to English)

Jempy

Posted by Jempy 2 months ago Report

A great body of workI hope to be half as good as you someday.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 1 month ago Report

Thanks! It just takes practice.