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Inevitable Betrayal By doomfister -- Report

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the conclusion to the Neon trilogy, where he betrays Octavia so that he might be granted amnesty from Bigshot's vengeance.

but will he sell out Octy for simple safety, read and find out. ;)

part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/463432
part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/468263

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33defence

Posted by 33defence 5 years ago Report

Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report

i see you are a fellow man of culutre ;).

PonyThroat

Posted by PonyThroat 5 years ago Report

i almost said out loud “oh snap!” On the reveal haha. Nice man

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report

glad you liked it :).

Nebbie

Posted by Nebbie 5 years ago Report

The pony in the previous story was Raspberry Beret, not Strawberry Beret.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report

fuck XD, going to have to make a change, thanks for pointing that out Nebbie, fixing it now.

VoraciousSincerity

Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report

Very heartfelt, glad I decided to try this. Loved the trick!

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report

aye, i had a lot of fun writing this one, like with all my stories, i am glad you enjoyed it.