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Starlight's Punishment By VoraciousShapeshift -- Report

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This story is basically me taking my hatred of Starlight Glimmer and the direction the show has gone, as well as my vore fetish, and combining the two into something that I surprisingly had a lot of fun with. I intended this to be a lot darker to alleviate my feelings over the past few weeks, but that ended up not being quite the case. Hope you all at least get a laugh out of this! Warning: You need to be caught up on the show to understand this, though not necessarily have to watch each and every episode in their entirety.
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I of course own nothing other then this story, the characters and world being the property of Hasbro.

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abstractCourier

Posted by abstractCourier 1 year ago Report

I... actually don’t know much about the recent season or what Starlight has done. I do know about when she needed to make a cake with friends and ended up mind controlling five of the mane six, but I thought that was comparable to that time Twilight cast the Want-It-Need-It spell on Smarty pants. I do like the idea of cruel pred Celestia, though. Bitter sweet feels are really nice, in both RPs and Stories. Good read. I’m guessing Luna is eating the rest of the mane six and/or Trixie?

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

I had Discord imply she might spare some of them, so feel free to imagine who was and was not eaten. As for the recent issues, look up the recent episodes, one of the worst being Starlight selling Trixie's wagon without telling her and never even considering her feelings or apologizing, even outright acting like she's in the right for it, with the episode not addressing it at all. As for the mind control, it is not like the Want-It-Need-It spell because Twilight was in the middle of an outright psychotic break, and Starlight is explicitly supposed to be past doing those things to others, as that was what she was originally doing with her Anti-Cutie Mark village. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, as I was considering tossing it until I got into a comedic rhythm with it as I typed.

whitpey

Posted by whitpey 1 year ago Report

I enjoyed it though I feel that starting relationships with a former enemy nation and stopping another civil war should have been bigger than they where or they imply that with discords magic it is temporary so they learn a lesson and don't repeat it.

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

Glad to hear people enjoy this despite it being rather shaky. I knew going off my raw emotion would cause difficulty but I'm glad it can still be enjoyed by others.

whitpey

Posted by whitpey 1 year ago Report

I think you did well everywhere else and also discord is starlights friend too and vise versa. So I do find it hard to believe discord won't bring them back for fun adventures. I enjoyed every other bit though.

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

If it makes you feel any better, a Discord story I intend to write in the future has reformation despite it not being my thing.

whitpey

Posted by whitpey 1 year ago Report

Cool. No worries though it didn't upset me or anything it was just me saying what I felt. Also ever thought about using thorax?

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

No. I am not a fan of what happened with the Changelings, as I find their concept dull and their colors and appearance disgusting. Him as prey though...(dark chuckle) THE HIVE WILL RISE AGAIN!!!!

I didn't really think it upset you, I was just wording it the best way I could think of. I assume you and my other readers would tell me if I really caused an issue with my writing.

whitpey

Posted by whitpey 1 year ago Report

Eh. If I don't have something nice to say about something I just don't talk about it.

whitpey

Posted by whitpey 1 year ago Report

And while I didn't like their designs at first and still don't, I do like the way one artist makes him look and act.

sevensix

Posted by sevensix 1 year ago Report

So... Twilight and Starlight, with the help of their friends, took advantage of their position as heads of a Friendship School to summon something called the Pillars? And then tried to use them to create "a place where everypony can be who they want to be"? (Giving ponies power over cutie marks, maybe?) And Discord tried to stop them, got disintegrated, then went and summoned the Sisters to actually stop them?

Sounds like a crazy sequence of events. Was all that in the show?

(Also, to be fair, Discord doesn't deserve ponies' friendship much more than Starlight does.)

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

No, he doesn't, but I wanted him in this story and I didn't want to add in my issues with his reformation to this.

Yes, it's in the show, but not what you think. The Pillars are apparently the precursors of the Elements, heroes that literally planted the seed for the Tree from which they sprung before being locked away. This was all revealed a season or two ago when they were freed, and myself and many others feel their idea is a pointless re-hash of the Mane 6 that contributes a lackluster origin for the resident magical superweapon, and also that it's unfair to have them live in a time they are not familiar with and have no ability to handle when time travel is possible in Equestria.

As I've mentioned, this was not my best work, and I intended this story to be a tie-in and expression of my feelings for what is currently going in the show that I am aware of. I apologize for the lack of exposition but I wanted this to stay short.

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

The part about everypony being who they want is my own nod to how I suspect Starlight thinks based on her behavior. She hasn't actually changed, just has gone from thinking friendship and cutie-marks make you better than everypony and divide ponies, to thinking friendship means "Working with everypony to create a world where nopony has to follow the rules because we're friends!"

Disintegrating Discord was in the recent episodes, Discord was being mean (but accurate) about Starlight when she was running the Friendship School and Starlight's solution was to vaporize him in full-view of the students...and in the process cause some serious property damage.

sevensix

Posted by sevensix 8 months ago Report

Having watched the episodes, I acknowledge your opinion but respectfully disagree. Time travel isn't a solution to problems. Discord was committing something between reckless endangerment and criminal assault, and some property damage was a small price to pay for a chance at stopping him. Starlight wasn't trying to vaporize him; just get him to leave. And while Celestia didn't explicitly order them to defy the rules and reopen the school, she was right there arguing with Neighsay, so she can't exactly plausibly deny her involvement.

Speedyblupi

Posted by Speedyblupi 1 year ago Report

No. The Pillars are ponies, including Starswirl the Bearded, and they were "summoned" (more accurately "rescued from limbo") before the school was founded.

You need to watch the show to understand the porn!

Speedyblupi

Posted by Speedyblupi 1 year ago Report

"Celestia's cheeks (I mean her face) burned red as fire."

lol

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

I am quite proud of that, glad you liked it. I owe the Fairly Oddparents episode "Power Mad" for that. It's nice to get a comment on an older story, thanks.