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Lost among wings By KinoTheCat -- Report

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So, its been a long time since I've uploaded anything, but I got really inspired to write a story a few days ago and this sort of just... happened.

A girl who loves to go out hiking finds herself lost and alone in the woods after an accident stranded her out in the middle of nowhere, but after making a desperate choice, she finds she's not as alone as she thought.

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ChaoskampfNunc

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 1 year ago Report

A handsome well fed harpy boy, what more could you want

Chameleonette

Posted by Chameleonette 1 year ago Report

OOF. HARPY BOI. OOF.

But seriously, this was great stuff, Kino! Mushrooms that shrink was an interesting approach to take with it. Really like the harpy guy you created, too! This was very nicely written, the chase scene was great, and OOF mid-air catching with the mouth and eating was VERY good. Loved the details.

And I see you went for the regrowth method, too! Hahaha. Well-played, indeed. I like that he kept a little reminder of her, too. (Or two, rather, as that pudgy belly certainly counts!)

Also, I liked the (un?)intentional irony of her feeling lucky from surviving the falls without injury, etc, thanking her lucky stars, and in the end, she gets eaten alive by a harpy guy. SO MUCH FOR LUCK. lol

KinoTheCat

Posted by KinoTheCat 1 year ago Report

Ahhh I'm glad you liked it! <3 magic Mushrooms is always a silly little thing that I enjoy, and if there are harpy boys why not shrinking mushrooms that he can taunt someone for being silly enough to eat them? She really should have known better.

Yes, I'm going to squeeze in that regrowth method when I can cause I'm trasssshhhhhh. <3 Very glad to hear you enjoyed the chase and the mid-air catch~ >u>

I actually had to rewrite the whole falling scene cause when I originally wrote it, it was a bit... too dark for my liking. <<;;

lesbiandefensesquad

Posted by lesbiandefensesquad 1 year ago Report

This was so good! Honestly the chase was really suspenseful--even if we all knew how it was going to end, haha. Shrinking prey is fun, too: you get the fun of mouthplay with the fullness of same-size prey. I love how he took her clothing back to his nest to remember her by!

KinoTheCat

Posted by KinoTheCat 1 year ago Report

I think the only thing I didn't make too apparent was that he was a Raven based harpy, so taking those clothing to remember her by was something I'm glad I added~

I'm really really happy to hear that the chase was suspenseful and hey maybe one day I'll subvert the whole site and let the girl get away! hahaha.... naaahhhh. x3

Bright

Posted by Bright 1 year ago Report

Really like it when prey gets their size back right after getting eaten.