Archive > VaguenessIncoming > Commissions and Requests > Original Works > Wild World > Little White Lies
Expand
Add to favorites | Full Size | Download
Little White Lies By VaguenessIncoming -- Report

Uploaded: 8 months ago

Views: 2,872

File size: 150.50 KiB

MIME Type: application/msword

Comments: 2

Favorites: 10

Tags: Anthro Bunny Casual vore Child Prey Collie Dog Emotional F/M Fatal Female Pred Fox fox girl Fox Pred Furry Implied Fatality implied hard vore Implied Vore Lamb Male Prey Non-sexual Original Characters Original setting Rabbit school Sheep Prey Stephanie Langley Story University Vore world willing pred willing prey writing Edit

One Tag Per Line!

Another commission for  Randomness!

In this prequel to Only the Dance Remains, young Stephanie Langley is given her final university assignment - and it's not what she expected at all.

Thumbnail drawn by the always awesome  MinaHyena.

Like my writing? Check out my commissions thread. There's monthly discounts and everything!

Comment on Little White Lies

Please login to post a comment.

Comments
Existing

Posted by Existing 4 months ago Report

I'll make this short.
An amazing piece once again. We can clearly see the 180 degree change S.L has towards young children (that are destined to become food).
The writing was well fleshed out, and the descriptions of each scene were quite detailed as well.
I also liked how you wrote the part where S.L sees and kills the smol rabbit. Given that in "only the dance remains", our one and only protagonist is none other, than a smol rabbit, I can see the pre-/ foreshadowing you are presenting to us. Also, even though the part where she kills the smol rabbit is short, it effectively paints me a picture of the blood-stained scene. I do believe our smol rabbit protagonist also had to experience the same thing, right? Or was it more than that?
Anyways, allow me to end this with a short paragraph that I wrote for only the dance remains.
"In that sudden yet expected moment, both parties felt a similar, yet different emotion. One side felt fear and betrayal, and the other felt regret and a slight tinge of pleasure. As the crimson red droplets fell on the floor, the world went silent, and one particular individual was crying and mourning of the death of the other.As the other party rose up, one statement was made. "I am death, the destroyer of bunnies.""

VaguenessIncoming

Posted by VaguenessIncoming 4 months ago Report

Hah! I love it!