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A fairy isn't sure how she's going to spend the winter. Then she spots a woman that she just HAS to have.
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A commission for gamdann, who wanted a hungry fairy and a hapless prey.
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Posted by Uryx 5 years ago Report
Heehee, people seem to like your stories about fairies eating people! Not that I'm complaining, since that's probably what I'd commission if I could afford it myself! At any rate, I hope you're not getting too bored of it, because I love these~ <3
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Seems like I've got a specialty, I suppose.
Posted by Uryx 5 years ago Report
Well, fairies are cool, but I more identify you with the cool compression stuff (with vore involved, of course). Fairies lend themselves to that because they're naturally small and magical, but truth be told I identify you more with compression in general than with fairies specifically~
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Compression, F/F, and non-fatal do tend to run strong in my writing.
Posted by DRayElliott 5 years ago Report
I'm DRayElliott, and I approve this message, lol. Seriously though, I'm the same way. I don't like fatal stuff unless the person is the most despicable human garbage you can imagine, and even then I'm a little ambivalent.
Posted by KlinKitty 5 years ago Report
Great story! Fairy preds are always fun~ I wonder how things'll go if/when Triana lets her snack out in Spring~
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Most of the characters I write end up falling for each other. I suspect such would not be the case this time around. Triana is enjoying taunting her meal just a bit too much.
Posted by Amberain 5 years ago Report
Yeah, but it has only been one day. I doubt Triana really wants to spend the winter with someone who hates her. Or maybe the woman will become so resigned to her fate that she won't complain about anything anymore. Either way, unless Triana is especially mean spirited (or really is planning to digest her), she's going to have to relent and take her prey's feelings into account eventually.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
This being a commission, it'd be up to the commissioner. If I were to continue this on my own, I think that Triana would gradually develop a legitimate gratitude for the companionship and start to feel guilty for taking advantage of her.
Posted by vasp 5 years ago Report
Oh goodness, where do I even start? Triana is an amazing predator, so affectionate and kind in the mischievous way that fey lean towards, yet so uncaring of her meal's protests. And she's just so possessive of her little bite of Spring! Ah I just love it all so much~
Of course, Triana bumbling around as she got used to her new tenant was absolutely adorable to boot.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! The premise and general content of the story is all thanks to the commissioner. The personalities and specifics are mostly my doing.
Posted by KalebAdvent 5 years ago Report
Another great fairy story! Pretty sure by now you've (almost) single-handedly made fairies my favorite fantasy creature.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
I do my best!
Posted by sweetladyamy 5 years ago Report
Fairies are amazing predators; it's a shame they're often seen as prey material only.
That being said, it would be more than awesome for this particular one to come across a meal that's more than willing, and I know at least one such individual...
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
She's liable to be looking for someone every winter, I'd reckon.
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
I know most of your stories involve the prey coming to like their place in the world/pred, or end up escaping, but it's wonderful to see a prey trapped unwillingly indefinitely from you, you pull it off excellently.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by RoboMax 5 years ago Report
Honey part into her dancing was great!
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks! The "packed in warm honey" visual was irresistible for me.
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
This really sounds like it’s gonna be a yearly affair... also since no one thinks anyone lives there anymore, would someone in real estate come by to try getting it sold? Would be a interesting scenario
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
That would be interesting. Would Triana run away, or would she gulp down a second person?
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
Depends on the person, maybe it’s someone who feels like a summertime hothead instead of a gentle spring? Maybe she could collect four seasonal people as meals