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Doria is a fresh-faced college girl just wanting to enjoy one last trip to the beach before semester starts. However, a bite on her heel ends up the start of a swift and terrible nightmare. And just because she's left the beach behind, doesn't mean that something, or someone, isn't still hunting her for more than just a small taste.
A horror story I've been wanting to do for a while, this one has a lot more focus on build up and escalation. Be aware there's blood (ramping up as the story goes along) and lots of fear. Not so much a Christmas time story but, eh, I missed Halloween. xD Hope you all like it!
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Posted by falafel 5 years ago Report
Is the merman named Freddy? xD Jk, I rarely comment but this was a great, creepy story
Posted by Belloc 5 years ago Report
XD Thanks a ton! Glad you liked it.
Posted by Kelly 5 years ago Report
Owo Im scared shitless
But thats good ... Amazing story
Posted by Belloc 5 years ago Report
Haha, definitely don't want him on your case!
Thank you!
Posted by Kelly 5 years ago Report
Well ... I wouldnt mind beeing pushed into his tight smelly gut <3 ... I mean ... OH NO PLEASE DONT <-< >-> <-<
Posted by jaggedjagd 4 years ago Report
That was intense, I freaking loved it. The part with the tear cutting her face genuinely terrified me... Excellent stuff.
Posted by Belloc 4 years ago Report
Thanks so much! I really wanted to go for horror here, so glad to hear it worked. XD