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Luna experiences a terrifying vision that makes itself a reality. Her alter ego, her greatest fear, made real and in the flesh - but surely, her sister will help her, right?
....right?
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Posted by Punisherfan123 5 years ago Report
Finally, a vore story where that worthless excuse of a character luna is put in her rightful place. That cunt should always be prey, never pred, and always unwilling. Fuck luna, this story is hot. Maybe a sequel where Daybreaker comes out and devours nightmare moon who's only slightly less garbage than luna and the 2 Solar Princesses fuck each other, maybe Cadance and Twilight coming in to mock the worthless sub-pony moonwhores?
Posted by EagleEye 5 years ago Report
Jesus, you take things way too far, huh?
Posted by Punisherfan123 5 years ago Report
How? Princess Celestia is great, luna is incomparably trash.
Posted by EagleEye 5 years ago Report
Well, that's not the way I went about the story, so posting something so over-the-top is a bit crazy. I just wanted one of the princesses as prey and I was feeling Celestia pred more when I wrote this.
Posted by Punisherfan123 5 years ago Report
Sad to hear you don't echo my hatred of luna. Still a great story, but it would benefit I think from going into greater detail with and lengthening the segments describing digestion, the belly softening and luna's crying and screaming turning to gurgled sobbing and pleading, Celestia rubbing her form through the belly, feeling the bones soften and occasonally crunch and/or squelch, incorporating the sex into the massive bellies, ie navel-fucking, maybe penetrating the prey through the navel, the massive guts slapping together as they go again, going into how the they ripple and jiggle with each thrust as luna is smashed by Celestia's belly slamming down on Nightmare's, etc. Just a bit more focus on the vore part I guess, and not having the belching and bellies happen as a part separate of the sex.
Posted by ChangelingWil 5 years ago Report
He goes around hating Luna in most MLP pics. It's weird.
That aside, as a vorestory it was nice! Nice work.
Posted by Punisherfan123 5 years ago Report
How is it weird? She deserves to be hated and nobody should like her.
Posted by ChangelingWil 5 years ago Report
In your own opinion.
It's not a fact. We get you don't like the character.
But going around spurging out and frothing at the mouth about it is pretty weird.
Like the creator said: He just wanted to write a story with alicorn prey. People are allowed to do that without needing over the top murderborners to be posted.