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A woman and her co workers go to a unique nightclub called the wagered wench where the cover fee is the only thing between you and the toilet...
A semi sequel to predcare where we see how some of the characters are doing.
Commissioned by the same anonymous commissioner.
Sidenote: I'm pretty pleased with how this turned out.
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Posted by BurningRuby1909 5 years ago Report
Love it!!! I love romantic ending in stories hehe even when both people are giant pervs hehe
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Man, you are killing it with these cute couples, i love it.
Posted by Cobbly 5 years ago Report
Kinda a shame they blacked out after becoming shit... Oh well, nice story!
Posted by Altimos 5 years ago Report
Awesome X3
<3 <3 <3
Posted by unaveragejoe 5 years ago Report
Pretty happy to see the doctor and those two doing well.
Posted by Liliumaurae 5 years ago Report
I'm so with Bea on the "it's sexy to imagine ending someone who doesn't deserve it, but I'd never really do it to someone so kind" thing.
I couldn't get through your family affairs series because it hurt too much. Too much... idk how to say, tragic loss of life? But this fatal I didn't feel half as guilty for. Somebody actaully gets spared who deserved to have a happily ever after.
I'm the one who suggested a "deep feels" tag. Or a "heartbreak" tag maybe. But I could also suggest a "good karma" tag for stuff like this. Happy endings for characters you make us care about. I get some people probably have a taste for unfair fate just like watse of potential for valedictorian or PhDs getting wasted. But for the rest of us.... "Good Karma" tag to make us feel safe. :)
Posted by 1u1u 5 years ago Report
Damn, you're the only writer I know of that can go in detail about the economics of eating people while still making a great story!
Posted by Blaze32202 5 years ago Report
Think you could add a place like this in your game
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
Would work better if the player was pred or switch. It might make for an interesting side project though.
Posted by grz01 4 years ago Report
Amazing story and adored the idea of the splash zone