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In which Sanwiene receives some important information, and some other things.
I decided to try something all different! This time, the perspective is from Sanwiene the paladin - we'll be back to the incubus again in part 9, don't worry!
A bit of worldbuilding, and just general writing practice on my part.
Sorry about the cliffhanger.
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Posted by MisterMeister 5 years ago Report
The prodigal son has returned. Nice work on world building. I was really hoping you'd do this sort of thing instead of just making it an impersonal view or just a series of meals and conquests for the incubus. And it looks like you’re finally diving into the subject of obsession and the true abilities of the incubus. Solid cliffhanger too. It actually fits quite well.
Posted by gullvy 5 years ago Report
Thank you! The primary reasoning for hitting perspective in this chapter was to give the reader a better understanding of what goes through the minds of the victims. My philosophy is that even though the story is a blatant power fantasy, I should still try to make the story as good as possible, beside all the lewd stuff.
While the paladin here is completely obsessed with the incubus, I'm thinking that Olive experiences it a bit differently, but I'll have to explore that in a future chapter.