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Tags: Ambiguous Ending April the Otter Blushing Breast Expansion Caring pred Casual vore Cum Cum Digestion Cum Transformation Dialogue Digestion F/F Female Female Pred Female Prey Furry Gay Gentle Pred Gentle Predator Girlfriend Girlfriend/Girlfriend Lesbian Melting melty digestion Mustelid Oral Sex Original Character Otter otter pred Otter prey pleasurable digestion pleasured pred Post-Vore romance Same Size Sex Sexual content sexual vore Story Unbirth Vaginal vore Weight Gain Willing willing digestion Willing Pred Willing Predator Willing prey writing
This is the first story I've written that is high enough of a quality to be worth sharing. The intro is a bit long, for the sake of providing some worldbuilding and introducing the characters, but leads up to some rather detailed smut at the end. At it's core, though, it's just a sappy love story about two weird otters. Which one of the otters is odder?
Make a guess as to which one ends up getting themselves ate. No, really, make a guess, leave a comment, say hello, and give your thoughts, whatever. Feedback sustains me.
I'm also looking for critique of any sort: grammatical errors, parts that might be too repetitive, or even just some different direction that the story could have gone in. Share whatever comes to mind!
April, one of the otters that appears in the story, was designed by incendiumursa with the help of the community here at Eka's. This is actually the first of several stories that features this character, which may or may not be of a quality worth publishing here.
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Posted by Rubiont-47 5 years ago Report
Sigh. This is was cute story from begining. They looks so happy. It is a pity that one of them decided to end her life. Rest in breast, silly otter
Posted by Shortpig 5 years ago Report
I did leave the ending rather ambiguous, on purpose. I'll just say this: Reformation is definitely a thing in this setting, even though not everyone has access to the technology. Whether the characters in this story use it, I'll leave up to the reader~
Though, future stories won't always be so vague. The next story that I'll be posting will have some clarification on the fates of the characters in it.
Posted by AndAnotherOne 5 years ago Report
Ahh this is what i was wondering about when i got to the end and Val wasnt alive. I had seen the you tagged it as reformation and non fatal and thought that meant she comes back while the fatal tag was for someone else.
Posted by Bellyl0ver 5 years ago Report
The level of intimacy described in this is amazing, rarely do I ever see a story written like this. Nice work!
Posted by Shortpig 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I can certainly agree with that - there's far too few examples of predators and prey that use vore as a method of intimacy, rather than just a means for pleasure (Even though the pleasure is plenty exciting to focus on, as well~).
Were there any parts in particular that you enjoyed reading through? Anything that made the characters' relationship stand out? I'm definitely quite curious as to what points felt the most intimate, such that I can learn what to replicate in future stories, ahah
Posted by Bellyl0ver 5 years ago Report
If I had to guess, it started at how that first kiss was described. After that, the whole thing just felt intimate and amazing. It felt incredible to read. Two beings, completely star struck, one allowing the other to consume them in an act of trust and faith, not just pleasure. It’s just so romantic.
Posted by delee926b26 5 years ago Report
For your first worth sharing, it was definitely worth it, wow...
Posted by Valorie 5 years ago Report
I like this, thank you!