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Rory accepts Helen's offer but it's not exactly what he expected
Also Rory's mom has a cameo appearance

Tentatively this is part one of a larger story, but I had this much ready and it seemed a decent breaking point

Post questions/comments'critiques and spelling/grammar errors so I can fix them
Please and thank you

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 8 months ago Report

A bit ruff in places with punctuation and flow, but all in all..... WOOT NEW CHAPTER!!!

I am assuming that these following chapters will be Rory Focused.

Would of like to have seen a bit more with Carol and Michael respectively; It would of been a good chance to get to know Carol (outside of her dinner rituals) and to expand on Roy's and Michael's relationship.

Cheers for the new chapter and it was great seeing some good quality family fun ;D

wizkid17

Posted by wizkid17 8 months ago Report

Helen has ardently vowed off-screen to never get Michael involved with her work, but Rory isn't off limits. He's gonna be the star for a little while.

chronicles1001

Posted by chronicles1001 8 months ago Report

Felt long but was enjoyable overall

wizkid17

Posted by wizkid17 8 months ago Report

I realized I needed to write in a break when I hit 6k words and I wasn't even done with the primary vore scene. This is about 1/2 - 1/3 of my original plan for this story

chronicles1001

Posted by chronicles1001 8 months ago Report

Felt long but was enjoyable overall