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Tags: alcohol Anthro Anthro Pred Cyndar Drool drooling drooling pred Drunk F/M Fatal Fox Fox Pred Human Prey Lythian Mini Giantess Naked Female naked male Naked pred naked prey Novella Oral Vore Rough Draft Sex Size difference small prey Soft Vore Story Vixen Vixen Pred Vore story Willing Willing prey world building writing
Tracy the Vixen is out for a night on the town! She’s getting married in a couple of days and her friends from the office are making sure she has a good time. As such, there is one thing they want her to experience that she hasn’t been able to due to her small size.
But now, thanks to HM-119, aka Brian, she can. And he’s more than willing to ensure that she has the most pleasurable experience possible. As it’s his purpose and deepest desire to do so.
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Well, this turned out a bit longer than I thought it would. Although, I still think it’s a good read and hope you all enjoy it. Plus, it’s technically a Novella now!
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Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
Thanks for pointing out that I put the wrong tag on this, should have been "fatal" and not "fetal." Spelling is hard sometimes...
Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
That's really sad no one posted a comment even after two days, The story deserves a lot more credit. I'm not usually posting comments but I don't want you to think your story was bad or not intresting.
It was really good, your world building, story-telling and writing are way above average considering what I'm used to on Eka's and Furaffinity. I've spotted a few typos but really nothing that could bother the reading.
The story itself was catchy and very intresting, I liked everything about the scenario and the world you created, the whole thing is very believable.
Unefortunately I'm a huge fan of post-vore description and long digestion and I admit I was excpecting more from you on that especially after reading all the descriptions you wrote before. TIn my opinion, the story could use some additionnal paragraphs. But that's normal if post-vore isn't your cup of tea. However I like this size difference a lot, smaller preys that make bulges are my absolute favorite !!
It really feels like you put time and effort in your work, that's very pleasing.
You can be sure I'll soon take a close look at your other works. Or even commissioning you if my wallet agrees with that.
Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much for the feedback, I do appreciate it and will try to hunt down those pesky typos! :)
I agree that I could have added a bit more afterwards, I just really liked the ending I came up with. Perhaps trying out a couple Post-vore scenes might be a good idea to expand my style a bit.
Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
You really deserve it!
Don't get me wrong, yhe ending is great and really in line with thr reste of the story. This was a very good way to end your story. It's just that, as a post vore fan, I would have loved seeing some.
If you're willing to try, that could be a great addition to your stories. But if you don't like it, don't force yourself to!