Posted by Whereaminow27 4 years ago Report

Pretty good. Hopefully there will be some unwilling preds or forced ones later too. Too bad she didn't have a friend like the last one did in the other story.

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I hadn't considered an unwilling pred for this universe, but I imagine a few scenarios where that could come about. Perhaps as a punishment game Elly could be forced into swallowing another tiny, or else where a jealous boyfriend force feeds her someone.

Posted by Tyslan03 4 years ago Report

Amazing story! I loved the assistance she got to finish off her friend. Keep up the great work!

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Thank you so much! It's such a thrill to get a comment from you, I'm a huge fan of your stories and the events in your "two fairies" story is what gave me the idea for the "assistance" Elly got.

Posted by BardicLasher 4 years ago Report

This story was great and I loved it! More like this please!

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I have a draft part 2 already written that touches on the rest of Elly's evening with the guys, after a rather intoxicating story suggestion from Tyslan03

I should have it up sometime tomorrow.

Posted by BardicLasher 4 years ago Report

Is it tommorrow yet?

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Haha yep, both https://aryion.com/g4/view/526109 and this https://aryion.com/g4/view/526288 carry on Elly's evening, as she has fun taunting Amy and then tricking another little tiny man into meeting Amy personally.

There's a potential part 4 planned, where some of Amy's tiny friends notice a distinctive bulge in Elly's belly as she feigns sadness over the "disappearance" of their friend. Elly then has to choose how to deal with them. I'm not sure yet what to do. More oral vore? Unbirth? Anal vore? Or would Stephanie enjoy organising a little prey-pred party game with them all?

Posted by BardicLasher 4 years ago Report

Clearly the answer here is more parties. Just grabbing them would be too easy.

I'm really only here for Oral as a whole, though.

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I'm just not sure on what kind of party games to pick from. Punishment games for preds, forcing them to swallow tinies? Kissing contests between preds who have prey between each of their mouths? Tinies used as rewards for winning other games? So many fun options <3

Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report

Welcome to Eka's Portal! :) This is a fun story. Like Tyslan03, I particularly liked the moment where Stephanie gives Amy a nudge with her tongue, sending her falling into Elly's mouth. And her quietly mouthed "Bon appétit!". She very much wanted to see her get swallowed, and clearly enjoyed helping out!

Elly's excitement at the start, as she secretly and naughtily looks forward to eating Amy, and wonders about how well she'll be able to digest her, was wickedly fun - and quite cute, in an evil sort of way. ;)

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Thanks for the welcome and the kind words! I've been a fan of your stories for a long time, I've lost track of how many times I've reread story 131 and think I could recite a fair amount from memory. So it gives me goosebumps to know you enjoyed the story <3

Elly and Stephanie were somewhat based on Tiffany and Linda from your story 131. I've long wondered how Tiffany might have reacted if Adrian had backed out at the last minute. I'm not sure if she'd be willing to let her new possession go once he got into her mouth~

I had originally wanted a longer ending segment where Elly assets her dominance over Amy a little more, as they had a conversation or two and Elly reveled over her control, but I'm keeping that for the sequel I'm currently drafting.

Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report

For Tiffany: I think it would have depended at what point Adrian had tried to back out. There were witnesses, after all, so she had to be careful. But if she'd heard him call out he'd changed his mind from inside her mouth, and if she was confident she was the only one who could hear him, I think she might well have swallowed all the same.

I'll look forward to the sequel, then!

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Ah that was the impression I got of her too. Although I wondered if perhaps she'd be less concerned about witnesses in the months ahead, once she was used to the idea of herself as a predator. I absolutely loved how she decided for Adrian whether his cry was one of pleasure or pain. It's a whole new tier of dominance when she not only controls what happens to him, but also gets to choose what his actions mean. I've been trying to write something in a similar vein, but it's difficult without inadvertently finding myself replicating your fantastic dialogue.

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I finished the sequel if you're interested: https://aryion.com/g4/view/526109

I'd love to hear your thoughts as I tried to do homage to some of your fantastic pred inner monologues etc. No worries if you'd rather not comment though, no pressure.

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Nice! Fun take on the concept, and some really nicely described voracious shenanigans!

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I've absolutely loved so many of your stories, your college games story inspired me to start writing, so I'm really excited that you like it~

I just finished the sequel if you're interested: https://aryion.com/g4/view/526109

Posted by nosuspicious 2 years ago Report

Re-read this today.. what an awesome debut for you!

I love how Elly sees poor Amy as food from the very beginning, taking advantage of her trust, coaxing her into making herself more appetizing for her. The best part is that Amy probably knows what’s been happening to tinies lately, but she doesn’t wanna offend her friend by not playing along. It’s lovely re-reading this knowing just how sadistic Elly gets in the sequels <3

Stephanie catching on to what’s going on and becoming a little accomplice is awesome, though no one there is all that concerned for little Amy.

The sexual content is great, I love how Elly uses Julian to further humiliate her prey. The image of her dragging him by his cock has always stuck with me... like he’s just a device for pleasure, a penis that happens to have a person attached. It’s suuuuch a hot way for her to see him.

Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report

I forgot about the pull-him-by-the-penis bit, I should do something like that again in a future story. Maybe attack a little leash to a cock <3

And thank you for the lovely feedback <3 This one was truly a work of passion from the heart, so many of my favourite things all crammed into one story.

Posted by Zerobotz 2 years ago Report

I'm ashamed I waited this long to read this series. There is something so hot about mixing vore and sex.

Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report

I don't dare reread this as it was my very first story and I imagine it's a bit rough in parts. But yeah I loooooove combining vore with sexual activity, as I basically see vore as just another sexual act, so they go well together <3

Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report

On my third read through now I believe and it's almost certainly not as rough as you think. It's as smooth and polished as it gets in my eyes. Was this an original or was it commissioned btw?

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

Thanks <3

This was an original story, the first I'd ever written. I'd so enjoyed marloweny's and French Snack's stories, but I wanted a little more sexual content in it, so I wrote my own version.

Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report

I went back and read marloweny's story and liked it a lot. The physicality of the deepthroat there is perfect. It was a good touch in your version for the pred to not be unaware of her actions, the betrayal always adds to this sort of thing. I'll have to check out French Snack's story as well!

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

Yeah the betrayal angle adds an additional emotional level to the domination theme, I love it. Originally I was going to write an alternative version of that scene where she swallows her friend just for my own enjoyment, but then I realised I should go a step further and write a whole story instead.

The French Snack story has some fantastic little domineering moments too, where the pred decides how to interpret the prey's actions as to whether they're willing or not. Imposing the pred's viewpoint on the prey was such a great touch.