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Nine Tailed Foxes, and one Tailed Catgirl By Fyr3 -- Report

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**Disposal warning**
One catgirl to rule them all!
This is a log of an rp and quite a big one between "Nine_Tailed_Foxes" and my catgirl "Esuna_Levins" and makes the story of how she got a new form.

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AngelicRune

Posted by AngelicRune 4 months ago Report

This was quite amazing, I loved it!

Fyr3

Posted by Fyr3 4 months ago Report

Yea, it was such fun I had to ask the other player if I could put it up for others to enjoy. Glad clearly several are. ^^

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 4 months ago Report

Could've had more detail in the disposal scenes but very well done!

Fyr3

Posted by Fyr3 4 months ago Report

Always up for pointers, PM me if you're not comfortable putting em public.

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 4 months ago Report

I dont really have many pointers as i dont write (yet!) but i do read a lot. To me, it felt like you were rushing through the disposal scenes which is fine for those that arent fond of them, but for those like me that have the scat fetish it could be a bit bland. Adding a bit more detail on it coming out, what it feels like to the pred or something, and possible some taunting from the pred could help a lot. You can leave the extra detail out and add the taunts for the times where you want to rush through the disposal, and then add the details for when youre really getting into it. Either option has a good chance at improving the story altogether. Hope this helps!

Fyr3

Posted by Fyr3 4 months ago Report

Okies, noted. To be honest, I hadn't done any disposal scenes with the other player yet so I wasn't entirely sure how far was fine.
But will keep it mind in the future. ^^

Lenny

Posted by Lenny 4 months ago Report

Although mostly outside of my usual preferences, I really enjoyed this story! Kudos to you and the other player for constructing such a beautiful story! I loved it!

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 3 months ago Report

This was really fun! I'm super glad we did this ^^