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**Disposal warning**
One catgirl to rule them all!
This is a log of an rp and quite a big one between "Nine_Tailed_Foxes" and my catgirl "Esuna_Levins" and makes the story of how she got a new form.
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Posted by AngelicRune 4 years ago Report
This was quite amazing, I loved it!
Posted by Fyr3 4 years ago Report
Yea, it was such fun I had to ask the other player if I could put it up for others to enjoy. Glad clearly several are. ^^
Posted by AndAnotherOne 4 years ago Report
Could've had more detail in the disposal scenes but very well done!
Posted by Fyr3 4 years ago Report
Always up for pointers, PM me if you're not comfortable putting em public.
Posted by AndAnotherOne 4 years ago Report
I dont really have many pointers as i dont write (yet!) but i do read a lot. To me, it felt like you were rushing through the disposal scenes which is fine for those that arent fond of them, but for those like me that have the scat fetish it could be a bit bland. Adding a bit more detail on it coming out, what it feels like to the pred or something, and possible some taunting from the pred could help a lot. You can leave the extra detail out and add the taunts for the times where you want to rush through the disposal, and then add the details for when youre really getting into it. Either option has a good chance at improving the story altogether. Hope this helps!
Posted by Fyr3 4 years ago Report
Okies, noted. To be honest, I hadn't done any disposal scenes with the other player yet so I wasn't entirely sure how far was fine.
But will keep it mind in the future. ^^
Posted by Lenny 4 years ago Report
Although mostly outside of my usual preferences, I really enjoyed this story! Kudos to you and the other player for constructing such a beautiful story! I loved it!
Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report
This was really fun! I'm super glad we did this ^^