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Chapter 2 of VPG. New Characters, new names, and new stats. Welcome... to Vore-RPG.

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Morphy

Posted by Morphy 9 days ago Report

Now I have to wonder if the mentioning of Elia's abilities in the first chapter was Chekov's Gun and we'll see if she can down a full-size dragon, heh. The bit about the ogre was kind of alarming; if one didn't know about the default settings, a female player might be rolling to dodge and flee IRL. XD

As an aside, I'd make all the slimes docile when not in a game-- they must be a million times better than a plain ol' beanbag chair. ;)

CrimsonFangX666

Posted by CrimsonFangX666 9 days ago Report

I highly recommend looking at all of their abilities as Chekov's Guns. Those are level 1 abilities. Any seasoned RPG player knows base abilities get better with every level.

I did think about that with the slimes. What stopped me from mentioning it this chapter was the fact they need an electrical charge to make them active, otherwise they're just shapeless blobs on the floor.