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CotCK Spinoff Story: Nana and the Beast By AbbottWarr -- Report

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Spinoff from EvilFuzzy9's "Concubines of the Carnivore King" series. Features Nana coming to terms with her feelings. Link to original story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/496458

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EvilFuzzy9

Posted by EvilFuzzy9 8 days ago Report

Oh, you did it like a spin-off? I thought you were just going to do it as a fanfic of a fanfic. I see.

Saying “First chapter here” might be a bit confusing for readers, though. You could probably clarify it better by saying something more along the lines of “You can find the original story here”, or “You can find the story this is based on here.”

Was a bit put off by the bestiality tag until I looked through and saw it was just tentacle rape. I think that’s considered a distinct thing from bestiality, so it would usually be tagged differently. (Okay, looking closer, there IS other bestiality referenced, but only passingly)

Also, resurrection is misspelled in the tags. A small nitpick, but good to take note of.

As for the story itself... I dunno. My own tastes skew more toward the cooking and eating side of things with human or humanoid preds. I’d rate this sort of hard vore above same size soft vore (and same size soft vore over the weirder stuff like anal vore/unbirth), but I prefer dolcett, so it’s hard to say.

The writing looks fine, at least. That’s something that can always stand to be improved, but as long as it’s at a basic level of grammar and spelling, you can get by. I wouldn’t call it great, but then I wouldn’t even call my *own* writing great.

But Nana is fun to mess up and around with.