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Having had her fun swallowing two 6" tall tinies the day before, Elly proceeds to go about her college life as normal. Taking delight in teasing her meal while they remain conscious and daring anyone to challenge her on the distinctive outline pressing out from her belly.
This is a continuation of the Elly story arc, you don't have to have read the earlier chapters, but you can find the last chapter here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/526288
If you liked this, I'd highly recommend checking out krishna3ca's old vore stories that have a heavy focus on post-vore teasing and dominance. It's what inspired this chapter.
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Posted by 3l33thax0r 4 years ago Report
Oh, I can’t wait to see what Elly has in store for Abagail on her tiny friends!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm eager to find out too! I haven't settled on any specific scenario yet. A little competition between Elly and Chloe could be fun, and if one of the tinies doesn't make it to the contest then there's lots of fun alternatives for that tiny. If you have any suggestions/preferences then feel free to let me know~
Posted by 3l33thax0r 4 years ago Report
Well, seeing how Elly seemed to be a bit competitive in the last chapter, you might have given her a challenge in the pharmacy. “Four is about my limit so far,” seems like a dare to me. Too bad there aren’t five or six tiny morsels laying around... oh wait... ;)
Just a thought, I’m sure whatever scenario you come up with will be epic! It’s been a blast reading through what you have so far. :D
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Haha that would be a fun scenario, although Elly likes to watch her figure. There's so much fat content on these tinies in their asses and tits. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm excited to write the next chapter too~
Posted by Dragónmacro 4 years ago Report
will there be more scat content in your future macro / micro stories? One suggestion: it also adds fart, urinated, more scat, humiliation (example: that Elly is scat the enzyme of the tinies), diapers (example: that elly has the diaper on and that there is inside the diaper all the tinies are trapped and thrown farts and that is urinated and that popo is done inside in the diaper with all the tinies)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
The scat stuff probably won't get much more explicit than it already is. While I love the domination/humiliation angle of digestion, I'm not really into scat itself. So I'll touch on it as something that happened, but it's not really something I'll describe in detail sorry.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 4 years ago Report
I'm really enjoying this series a lot, I like how elly enjoys teasing and taunting amy will she digests her all the while going about her day like she normally would, I also like how she gets Amy's sister and friends involved in her fun as well as wanting to take them to another party. I'm also glad that lucas digested before Amy it made things a lot hotter with just her being digested and subjected to elly's merciless teasing.
Great work
(again excuse my lack of grammar)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the detailed feedback, I always love to hear which elements of the story you enjoy so I can tweak my writing to focus more on it. I really enjoyed writing Amy and Elly's dialogue, Elly is so deliciously cruel~
I was a little unsure what to do with Lucas, I felt a little bad for any Lucas fans that he had pretty much no role this story, but I thought his angry tone would detract from the cat-like playing Elly was doing with Amy.
Also your grammar is excellent~
Posted by Umhuebr 4 years ago Report
Honestly, this is outstanding work! Loved this chapter specially, the way the disposal was structured was beyond simply great!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm generally not too into scat type stuff, but I love the complete domination that comes from Amy being digested like that. So I had to allude to it at least a bit~
Posted by ShinjiIkari 4 years ago Report
I loved this story! I hope you will make more of that with post-vore teasing.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm ever so glad you liked it! The pred-prey teasing is probably my favourite part of vore stories. I'll certainly be including more in future stories <3
Posted by ShinjiIkari 4 years ago Report
I feel the same way about teasing. It's so important and makes everything like, spicy. If a story misses those parts, then I add them in my head, insulting the prey or worshipping the Pred...
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Ah yeah definitely! I'm just going to need to come up with new ways to tease the prey, I went through a lot of my favourite lines already this story.
Posted by EmmaTummy 2 months ago Report
I really hope I get to be even half as good as you one day. Been a fan for years. Keep it up!
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 months ago Report
That's very kind thank you <3
I haven't been keeping an eye on new stories, so I missed yours, I'll need to give them a read as they look fun!
Posted by EmmaTummy 2 months ago Report
Holy crap, thank you. That means so much coming from you! <3
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 months ago Report
I've not given your stories a proper read yet, but it seems we've been drawn towards similar content, mixing vore themes of betrayal/domination with explicit sexual acts, and you even include my favourite garnish too: lots of cum <3
Posted by EmmaTummy 6 days ago Report
Just realised how shallow this all seemed and I really hope it didn't come off that way. Been a lurker for a long time. You're a huge inspiration and the reason I started writing vore stuff in the first place. It may sound silly, but your stories mean so much to me.
I definitely wouldn't have the tastes I have today without you lol
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 days ago Report
Oh it wasn't shallow at all, I'm ever so flattered to have inspired someone to write their own vore stories. Talking of which, the latest one I saw you post looks to be exactly my favourite kind of thing~
Feel free to say hi to me on Discord (bunnywrites) if you have an account there. e.