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A sequel commissioned by Max123.
Taking place just after the end of the first story, one of their nosy neighbors shows up. Due to a minor misunderstanding, Zaubrek enjoys a fine desert consisting of an annoying woman.
This gives John and Webster a great opportunity to see just how large their guest has gotten. Which leads to a fun post-vore scene where they subject the poor creature to a host of measuring and rolling around.
Good fun!
5936 words.
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Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
I'm curious, which ideas in the story were yours and which were the commissioner's ?
In any case, your writing skills are always on point! I really can't wait for your other stories :)
Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
Well, Max supplied the basic idea and a rough outline of how he wanted it. From there I wrote a draft and he suggested additions or changes with each revision. It's the way I usually like to work with people, so that they're sure to get the best product I can deliver.
Posted by Shadydancer 10 months ago Report
Very nice ending. I did like how despite the mind control (I think) making him detached, he still couldn't resist seeing the three off.