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A young man is stopped on a hike through the woods and given a sexy surprise by a rather randy she-bear. During their brief interlude, some accidental butt-stuff happens.
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This is a quick piece of flash fiction (for me anyway) that I sort-of banged out in while editing a larger work. As I tend to work on several projects at once. I hope you all enjoy it! It was loosely based on a nice piece of artwork done the very talented aoino_broome on FA and Patreon. Give it a look and add her (I think) to your watch list --> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/32134559/
I have a vore version of this in the works and should be done soon, I hope...
Please leave let me know what you think, I love to get feedback, good or bad. I'm at a loss for tags on this, if you think of any, please suggest them. :)
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Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
That one is truly amazing. You're very good at writing plain sex aswell !
I liked the format a lot, it's faster to read than your other works, but it doesn't feel rushed at all, the pace is very well managed.
I think a small introduction could be a nice addition to the next version to come. Nothing fancy, just several lines of text to add a context and a description of the characters.
The story was very fun to read overall, I chuckled when you I got to the "leather cheerio" part. You have some amazing description, sometimes even poetic.
The vore version might be one of your best stories, I can't wait for it to be published !
Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it. :)
I had meant to add one. I started at this point thinking I would go back later, something I do with a lot of my writing. But I just felt it should jump right into it without too much preamble.
I too found "leather cheerio" a bit of a chuckle.
Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
Don't get me wrong, I don't think that lack of introduction is a flaw, it's very good the way it is !
Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
The Vore version has a nice introduction that I think works out pretty nice.