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Tags: F/M Female Pred Food Transformation Human Pred Human Prey Implied Digestion Implied Fatality liquid prey liquid transformation liquid vore Macro/Micro Magic Male Prey Oral Vore Short Story Shrinking Size difference Soft Vore student prey student vore teacher teacher pred teacher predator Teacher/Student Transformation transformation vore transformed transformed into food unaware unaware pred unaware predator unaware vore writing
Melvin is studying in his teacher's office, although, not very successfully. So, he decides to cast a little spell to clear his mind and, perhaps, impress his teacher. However, things don't go as planned and he finds himself in a very... damp situation.
The interesting thing I liked about this project was that there was no dialog. It's all narrative and I think it worked out pretty well. I may do an alternate version of this later, I like that idea. One with a bit of dialog at the end.
Please let me know what you think, I love to get feedback, good or bad. :)
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Posted by oishi1 4 years ago Report
Unaware transformation is some of my favorite stuff. The description of his consciousness going multiple directions was great.
Only note of cleanup would be several redundancies in the early bit, but the story flowed great.
Posted by Pharo 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it. :)
I’ll be sure to keep an eye out for that in the future as I do need to work on being a bit more concise.
Posted by Luckless 1 year ago Report
I really enjoyed the idea of being drunk, in a drink that is. I've seen it first in that Vyatich story where students were transformed into tiny living sugar beings and one was tossed into a cup of tea and drunk. I'm so glad this is a genre that's expanding! If you haven't already seen it, there's an adult swim sketch that features some fine tea-tf-getting drunk down unaware right here https://youtu.be/fLGYzOH4be8?t=601
Excellent story!
Posted by Pharo 1 year ago Report
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Haven't watch AS in a while, should catch to some stuff.
Posted by kbDArt 10 hours ago Report
Excellently written erotic short story. A novel transformation idea.