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Camille begins her first day of work at the Dolcett girl-meat processing facility. A surprise inspection by the bereau of the Ethical Consumption of Women results in a mishap where the inspector gets an up-close and personal view of the spitting process.
There's no gore in this story, it's mostly prep, bondage, sexual content, then spitting. It was inspired by a suggestion from TitaniumChelle who also helped edit and write the story. I'd highly recommend checking out their gallery if you enjoy this content, both for their fantastic drawings and stories.
I fancied doing something a little different to all my usual vore stories, I think I got all vored out from the massive swallowing orgies in some upcoming story drafts. So I'm going to experiment a little with a few other cooking/dolcett type tales before switching back to vore. If anyone has any suggestions on stories, settings, characters, punishments, sequels etc in this world, I'm always happy to hear them <3
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Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I really enjoyed collaborating with you too! I hope we can do it again someday if you've the free time and are in the mood for it <3
Posted by HeinrichK 4 years ago Report
I already gave lengthy feedback on the Pulptoon forum, so that it can be seen here as well, I really enjoyed this story and am hoping I can read the sequel one day. :)
Posted by Uri 4 years ago Report
Absolutely, amazing story! Loved it!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks so much! I'm just sketching out a possible idea for a sequel after a fan contacted me requesting her and her twin be roasted together. I think it could be a fun scenario~
Posted by emikochan 4 years ago Report
Great story, thankyou ^_^
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it <3
Posted by SnackPup 4 years ago Report
So fucking hot! I loved it!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thank you~ I don't think it was quite as hot as Noelle got as she roasted, but it sets a goal~
Posted by BardicLasher 4 years ago Report
Ooh, great! More like this, please!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks <3 I have a story trade to do first, but then I have a sequel in the works involving a pair of twins (a self-insert request from a twin IRL), which should be a lot of fun to write.
Posted by SnackPup 4 years ago Report
Awesome! Is one a male?
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Not in this case, they're two identical twins. Would you want a story with a male prey? I haven't seen many of those in Dolcett themed stories, but it could be fun to write <3 Any particular scenario in mind?
Posted by SnackPup 4 years ago Report
I don't really mind as long as there is cooking and possibly sex. Being cooked by family is also rather enticing.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Oh I was planning some sex in the sequel. As Camille watches the twins roast, Adrian has to "punish" her for the inspector mix-up the other day by having his way with her. Plus of course the two twins will have some time chained together, 69 style, with a piercing from their tongue connected by a chain to the pussy lips of the other twin.
Posted by BardicLasher 4 years ago Report
I'm always gonna vote for all female prey, personally.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Generally I prefer female prey too as I like to self-insert as them. But occasionally I find it fun to mix it up and take a more femdom angle on it~
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
when she trapped the clit piercing between her teeth i though she was going to bite it off to, you know, remove all foreign object from the meat to avoid chocking hazards.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Oh that's a good idea! I hadn't thought of that. I'm not sure if I'd want to go for the biting method in this one, as I've generally shied away from any pain in the story, but she could have removed it with her tongue or something.
Posted by tvulture 4 years ago Report
Nice
Posted by CadetLT 3 years ago Report
This is a nice little story. The Dolcett-world meat processing stuff can be kind of fun, and having other women do it can add an extra layer to it, especially if the employees can so quickly end up on the processing line themselves.
I do tend to enjoy the roasting and carving bits as much or more than the prep, which my own stories tend to reflect, but I'd say in this case it was nice that she got the fillet as a reward for her first meat-girl on her first day in the end. Especially since it could be seen as a reward for going in with him to do away with the inspector. Guess that agency should learn not to send such tasty-looking inspectors if they want to get them back from the plants. ;)
Looks like you have some definite possibilities for sequels, and if you ever get tired of doing them you could always have Camille end up riding the spit herself for the finale. :D
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Yeah I really love that tension on the Dolcett universe where the line between free girl and meat girl is a thin one.
And yes, it's amazing the inspector lasted as long as she did in a job like that~
As for sequels, yeah there's a loooot of options. The end of it would have to involve Camille being cooked up, but I wasn't sure how many things I wanted to have happen leading up to that point. I have a half finished draft for a sequel where she takes part in cooking a pair of twins but kind of stalled with it as it stretched a bit long (by my standards).
Posted by CadetLT 3 years ago Report
Takes me month sometimes, and sometimes just because it can be pulling teeth to even just sit down and write when there are so many other distractions competing for me free time, so I wouldn't worry too much about taking a while. It's worth taking time, because usually the end result can be better that way anyway.
Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report
Oh lawdy this was a good one!!! Super great mix of seriousness and casually flirting with danger. I really love how risky the main char was throughout, certainly someone bound to be meat eventually :D
The piercing at the end was the B E A utiful little cherry on top, and you really did a great job on this :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear you liked it <3
And yeah there's no doubt one day Camille is going to be on the other end of sticking in that spit, perhaps as the company's christmas dinner as a reward for the other employees.
Normally folk disconnect the meat they eat from the farm animals they see. So I thought I felt the piercing was a nice way to connect the cooked meat she's eating with the real live woman she'd seen just a short while ago. This isn't just generic meat, she's eating that woman. Plus having a little memento is always a fun extra, like a Dolcett version of a Mcdonald's happy meal.