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Fracas By The Fridge By Omnium51 -- Report

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This one is actually a teaser for a much larger story I have in the works! It's one scene of many at a promiscuous Halloween party.

Compliments and/or critiques welcome! Let me know what you think.

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Justsomeone

Posted by Justsomeone 4 years ago Report

Halloween costume and vore is honestly one of my favorite things ever and the fact that you of all people are writing are story about it has me giddy.

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

I'm glad to hear that you're hyped for my next story! I hope that it will live up to your expectations. :)

Justsomeone

Posted by Justsomeone 4 years ago Report

I'm sure you will!

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Ah the story works really well even as a standalone. It makes me wonder how much of a lead-up I actually need in my own stories when it works so well here with just a few lines of dialogue explaining the situation so well.

I'm curious if you don't mind the question, do you write the story after coming across a suitable thumbnail pic, or do you choose the pic after writing the story? The thumbnail really feels like it fits your story so well and really adds to it~

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! I try to make my stories as concise as possible, but also with enough detail to make them interesting and immersive. It becomes more of a challenge the longer a story is, so I tend to opt for shorter ones when I write. That being said, I'm going to try my hand at a long story with the Halloween party that this teaser is for.

To answer your question, it's a bit of both! :) Sometimes I have a story idea/an ideal predator in mind and I go looking for a suitable picture after writing, and other times I am inspired by a particularly hot picture that I've stumbled upon. In this case, the picture inspired the basic scenario for this story and I let my horny imagination run wild with it.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I think concision is the most underrated virtue in a writer. It shows a respect for the reader.

I think releasing little segments of longer stories like this can be a nice way of keeping yourself motivated. I find I tend to stall once a story gets really long, I think we writers all feed off the positive feedback~

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

I absolutely agree! Especially with your point about feeding off of positive feedback. Always feels great to get compliments! :)

EliteVorrior

Posted by EliteVorrior 4 years ago Report

I'm consistently impressed by your stories, and I can't wait to see what you'll do with something a bit longer.

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! :) I hope that you'll like the longer story too!

Spur

Posted by Spur 4 years ago Report

"a teaser for a much larger story at a promiscuous Halloween party"

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Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

http://gph.is/19yQDcd

Spur

Posted by Spur 4 years ago Report

Action begets motivation, homie

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

I'm workinngggg on itttt
Life's been a bit busier than usual lately :/

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Great work, easy going, sexy read. Cant wait to see what the longer story becomes!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

Thank you! :) Sorry for the delay on the full story, I promise that it will come eventually!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Hey no rush, good things sometimes take time to mature. :) Ive only just come across your feed, and like your style. Great work!

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

I appreciate the kind words, and I hope you find more stories of mine that you enjoy!

VincentShadowScale

Posted by VincentShadowScale 3 years ago Report

seems like some good mass vore is on the horizon~

Omnium51

Posted by Omnium51 3 years ago Report

Oh, you can bet on that! ;)

VincentShadowScale

Posted by VincentShadowScale 3 years ago Report

can't wait to see it~ makes me hungry just thinkin about it~