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So hey, I was originally going to start posting a whole bunch of my vore stories here. That was about three years ago, and some things in my life happened since then that have taken, literally until now to attend to and get back to the point where I can write vore stories for fun and fully immerse myself into my kink fantasies.
Anyway, this is a revision of my very first vore story which I have since made private as I am no longer satisfied with the quality, as I have become a much better writer since then so I'd like for my complete catalog of stories to share the same quality. Honestly I would have liked to completely rewrite this story to have more lead up into it, but I've got better ideas I'd like to focus on.
Also for anyone who ends up following my work from this point on, you'll soon notice I'm really into breast vore, so it'll be very unlikely for me to make a story where that isn't the focus.
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Posted by VoreLover9012 4 years ago Report
shouldn't it be F/M?
Posted by Vorango 4 years ago Report
Fixed, thanks!
Posted by CompactorFlame 4 years ago Report
Always good to see more breast vore writers around here! My favorite too~
Posted by Vorango 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I've read a lot of your stories over the years! It means a lot to me that you liked it!
Posted by CompactorFlame 4 years ago Report
Oh, you have? Means a lot to hear that, as I'm trying to get out of a writing rut myself! Sex is something I don't enjoy so I kinda skipped to the 'good parts' as it were, but I did like what I read there. ^^
Posted by Vorango 4 years ago Report
I usually try to go for a more realistic approach with my stories, and humans tend to like foreplay/sex. Obviously I'm not too into it either since it only lasts a short while, but it made sense for this scenario to me so I included it. In the future I'll definitely be making stories where it's a scenario where the characters wouldn't be making out beforehand so I'm sure you'll like those more!
Posted by Restrogenic 4 years ago Report
First of all,let me just say that you wrote a really great story. My only issue is that I went into it without checking the tags first. I'm not a big fan of Fatal, even more so with a cruel pred like Sasha here. I just dont understand her leap in logic. Rather than trying to break it off with him or tell him how annoying he is, she goes straight to cruel, brutal and lethal irony.
Still, great writing! I'll probably be checking out your profile a little more if they're at this level of quality.
Posted by Vorango 4 years ago Report
That's understandable! My personal preference is fatal/cruel preds, so it'll probably take a really good idea for me to consider writing a non fatal vore story. As for why Sasha did what she did, there might be some reasons that I didn't bring up. I left one hint as to what's going on and it's very subtle. In future stories I plan on going into a bit more detail about the mentality of any characters I have who are cruel predators.
Posted by Vorango 4 years ago Report
Also thanks for saying you liked my story! It really means a lot especially from somebody who's not into fatal/cruel preds!
Posted by Restrogenic 4 years ago Report
Sure thing!