Yep. No lab-explosion in the history of science-fiction as ever managed to destroy ALL the weird mutant creatures within. ;P
Is this a hint of more in this setting someday? Because I really do love all those fascinatingly cool voracious plant-thingies you invented for this series. Additional stuff with them, or new ones, would be very welcome indeed.
You're very right -- I'm not 100% used to writing vore yet. Especially with a story this long, it's a struggle to balance the vorish elements with all the serious narrative stuff I want to do. It really just comes down to what feels right to me personally, and no doubt there are ways to do it better.
Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by MasterGryph 4 years ago Report
The building is gone with hardly a trace, but Life finds a way...
Posted by Barghest236 4 years ago Report
The exact phrase I had in mind. ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Yep. No lab-explosion in the history of science-fiction as ever managed to destroy ALL the weird mutant creatures within. ;P
Is this a hint of more in this setting someday? Because I really do love all those fascinatingly cool voracious plant-thingies you invented for this series. Additional stuff with them, or new ones, would be very welcome indeed.
Posted by Barghest236 4 years ago Report
Could this story be the start of a mutant plant apocalypse? Who’s to say?
Posted by thelandcruzer 4 years ago Report
I liked the series.
Two things that might've made them better is some endo to lengthen out the vore screen's and some more descriptions in the sex scene's.
It just seems kinda rushed in those scenes.
Kind like your not use to writing though's kind of scene's.
The one endo scene was good but a little too short. (Some dialog between the girls would've add greatly to the scene.)
But hey what do I know? I'm just another amateur Adult fetish writer.
Posted by Barghest236 4 years ago Report
You're very right -- I'm not 100% used to writing vore yet. Especially with a story this long, it's a struggle to balance the vorish elements with all the serious narrative stuff I want to do. It really just comes down to what feels right to me personally, and no doubt there are ways to do it better.
Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it!