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In his coils By Herosguild -- Report

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This was an experimental story i thought i'd try out with Riley from The Boondocks. I just love his character. I thought the cover image also made him look more naga like minus the color. Let me know what you think.

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Posted by hunter2045 9 months ago Report

Breaking this up into paragraphs would make for easier reading.

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Posted by Herosguild 9 months ago Report

Yeah, I thought I should change that about my stories it was still good thought right?

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Posted by hunter2045 9 months ago Report

Yeah. But it's hard to read the way that it is currently.

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