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You never think it'll happen to you. Then the next thing you know, you're shrunk down, trapped in a box and waiting to be eaten alive by a preteen girl. Go figure.
The second story in my Bite-Sized series, providing great vore content while at the same time laying the ground work for things to come... Oh, the things I have planned... Poor Dave...
All the completed stories in the series can be found here (once they're done):
https://aryion.com/g4/view/546518
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Posted by Jakar 4 years ago Report
This has potential to be among my favourite of stories. While the first got my attention, it now has my interest that it has switched focus to a single prey character. I know that's more of a preferrence but I do feel it makes it easier to envision yourself in the scenario the writer has created that way.
And other than that, I'm glad to see a somewhat realistic setting. Too often am I disillusioned and pulled out by too many fantasy themes taking place. Just a girl and her box of tinies. And while that obviously is still far from the realm of possibilities, it's still not too far removed that I'm constantly having to fight my suspension of disbelief.
Finally, ageplay and vore are my two main kinks, yet I've never seen them done all that well, or at least, not to my taste quite yet. So I'm crossing my fingers that this can blend the two and might possibly touch upon the taboo-ness of what gives a thrill from ageplay as well as the vore.
So you're on track but now that you've set the scene nicely, I hope the next chapter slows down a bit, maybe delves a little deeper into her motivation thus allow for less one-sided conversation and more effectful teasing between this pre-teen girl and her snacks. :)
Posted by TheDragonBoy 4 years ago Report
I’m glad you like it so far; niches are what I aim for :)
I’ve hardly begun to really dive into the perspective of the prey or the underage aspects of the pred, there’s a good deal more planned.
While most of my other stories are fantasy, this one is more on the sci-fi side (though I’ll be going pretty light on the “sci” part), hence the more grounded setting.
I do have a one question though. While I will be exploring a bit more of her motives, I’m not sure exactly what you meant by “more effectful teasing”. More effetful on the tinies or on the reader? Could you elaborate on that a bit?
Posted by Jakar 4 years ago Report
Hmm...both, I suppose. I meant that that it would have more of an impact were there to be more of a connection between her and her tinies. The effectiveness of the teasing would be amplified by that.
Sorta like how a girl you've known for a week breaking up with you is no big deal but a wife of 40 years would be.
That's all. ;P Looking forward to it!
Posted by TheDragonBoy 4 years ago Report
I think I get it now, thanks.
Well, I have my plans. I hope they satisfy