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The Incredibles: Dash All Hope Ye Who Enter Her By surtech5 -- Report

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After their jet crashes, landing the super powered family in the sea, things take an even darker turn as Elstagirl is hurt. Unable to track the missles back to land, and with a storm brewing, a rubber boat won't do the trick. The only way to keep them safe, is with a fleshy submarine.

This was a request I made a while ago that didn't impress the person who asked for it. Finally decided to upload some of my old work so I'm putting it up anyway.

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Borgle

Posted by Borgle 5 months ago Report

This is really good maybe a 2nd part where hellen eats vi?

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 4 months ago Report

I'll keep it in mind, but I doubt I'll make a part two to this story in particular.

z3d

Posted by z3d 5 months ago Report

Very great story, not sure why the person who asked for it was not impressed. This was a great read from start to finish

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 4 months ago Report

I have about a 50/50 track record with requests. So this just means next one has a better chance of being great... I know math.

Dos

Posted by Dos 4 months ago Report

That went dark. A little too dark for me but this was incredibly well written.