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Office Vore Redux By surtech5 -- Report

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John's office is filled with attractive women that make each boring day worth while. Now that his temp position is coming to an end, he only has two goals left there:

1. Get out of the building.
2. Get inside the women.

Unluckily for him, both are fulfilled.

Original Story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/203579

I have full permission from krishna3ca to remake these stories!

This was the first of the stories I planned to remake alongside "2 Foot Janitor" "The Desert Ride" and possibly "A Little Accident". The plan was to release them all at once, but I think I've majorly lost faith with the project and got distracted by other things.

If you want me to continue, please let me know!

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SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 months ago Report

My only complaint is you cut the disposal scene and turned it into implied disposal...otherwise not a bad re-work

SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 months ago Report

I wouldn’t mind seeing a re-work of “Desert Ride”

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 5 months ago Report

Yeah, I'm not really into scat so I don't know if I could do one justice.

Bright

Posted by Bright 5 months ago Report

Nice story.

oishi1

Posted by oishi1 5 months ago Report

I approve of this idea. I know English isn't his first language, so this adds clarity without insulting the original work. I would love a redux of "A Tiny Accident"

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 4 months ago Report

Thank you. I was a bit hesitant to remake any work, but I felt this was just enough change to make it worth while without being enough to be considered a rip off.

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 4 months ago Report

I've read it and liked it and forgot to comment! Anyways, your story is great. I think the original is better on the disposal part though. All other stuff and the story fluff around it... You win!

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 4 months ago Report

Yeah I'm not the best at scat. And hey now, this isn't a competition... Yet...