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Back for More Part 9 By VoidInVoid -- Report

I think this part went through the most rewriting I've ever done since the Supreme Succubus of the Burning Realm's intro part. I think I erased three-thousand or more words and introduced some of the plot earlier than I had originally planned.

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Darktroll

Posted by Darktroll 5 days ago Report

Of course Lauren's group isn't going to have it easy! It wouldn't be fun if it was! It was a shame that Franklin didn't stay long as he was sent out as bait, but the question is, who was the assassin and what are goals. But on another note, I bet you Nadalia's group is gong become hostages in the next part(s) once they regroup and maybe held in a belly.

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 5 days ago Report

I had planned to introduce this assassin two series from now, but after scrapping an uninteresting and out-of-character rescue mission, I decided to take the assassin out of my box of plot(lines).