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Chapter 3: A few things happen, the plot thickens, there's more exposition, but most importantly: the lesbian doesn't get with the other woman - try again next chapter.

Enjoy!

Thanks to  Solmaximuta for edits, proofreading, advice, and being a cool dude.

Chapter 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/542150
Chapter 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/547265

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Progressive: Comments and feedback are appreciated! Without them, I'll never know what's working and what isn't, so thanks in advance.

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MagicOddEffect

Posted by MagicOddEffect 9 days ago Report

More beautiful, compelling writing. I love it.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 8 days ago Report

<3 Thank you! I'm trying my best!

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cloud8745

Posted by cloud8745 8 days ago Report

So far, so good! I look forward to more!

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 8 days ago Report

More is on the way! I'm hoping to get two additional chapters out before taking the month off for National Novel Writing Month in November.

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threk

Posted by threk 7 days ago Report

You'd think she'd spend some more time teaching the guards, both male and female, how to avoid being swallowed up by some female adversary if it's such a major threat in this world :P

Love the story, I'm properly invested now :D

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 6 days ago Report

That scene was the only way I was going to fit any vore into this chapter :p

Thanks for reading!

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