Posted by sharky 4 years ago Report

I really enjoyed this read. I would love to see more stories with these ladies. Keep up the great stories

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

thank you, and I hope to create more!

Posted by sharky 4 years ago Report

But you need to add a shark

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

I wonder if you will command more stories related to this alternate universe ? I really love how Gabi and Lily have grown out of their habits, then focus on what is really important and how they have gain new true friends on their group

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

Yes, I plan on doing some spin offs

Posted by neko1992 4 years ago Report

Seems they gained werebreast forms in that in their original world but fun to see more or #2 Emily finds the game and they go to rescue her

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

That would be amazing, really

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

It will be really good to see how they manage in the real world, how their relationship goes( first person other than Lily to come out alive), how their encounter with different character will go( Jill, Samanta ) and how Karen will do with the fact that Gabi family are cold blooded murderers

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

Watch Gabi grow a spine and actually respond to Jill will be a good shot, perhaps some vore pred to go( Gabi is a lion )

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

And i was wondering why Karen is so bitter in the beginning ? In my experience, people are defensive like that when they are hurt from a very long time, no just stressed

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

How this could affect their relationships in the real world, I'm not sure if I want to tackle that. This was an alternative universe story and I think it would be very complex to add that to all my upcoming stories. As for Karen, it was the fact that she never was able to be herself. Leaving in a world where your looks and who you pretend you are matters more than anything within you can make you really bitter.

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

I accept this explanation for the beginning, but it's do not explain why she was like that even before the story begin.

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

I do not think it will not be a problem for you to imagine a good scenario with this four and command it to a good writter like vagueness and brazzel. You have alredy proved that you have a good imagination with all the comics and writings ;p

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

But if you have problems to find scenario, you could also use your previous story to make stories. You said it yourself, it's an alternate universe, you could pretty much do anything without almost care for the previous characters we know from before, because they are not the same than their alternative counterpart( Gabi, Lily ). They are more more mature, brave and stronger than before gunung.

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

I also admit than i really want a answer to my eternal question.

Posted by Dickevin 4 years ago Report

When i think about it, it's ironic than Karen,the shitty bitches that swear and is annoying as hell with her non concealed thought, is the most reliable of the whole groups when it come to morals, selfless and when it's time to save your hide

Posted by harharharhah 2 years ago Report

These stories were great reads, but the conclusion leaves much to be desired. Where did modern industrial tools like helmets, handcuffs and rifles come from when most of the villages are pretty primitive and armed with sticks and stones? Does time pass slower in the real world like in Narnia or is it in real time? If it’s the latter then why didn’t anyone worry about the girls disappearing for weeks and call the police? Based on the witches age Gunung must have been around for decades so wouldn’t people have figured out the same cursed board game is always present where people vanish? In the end did the necklace serve any actual purpose than to give the witch power and Ellen a vision?

Other than that I really enjoyed these stories. I like that vore wasn’t shoehorned as porn but used as a plot building device. I also really liked the authors hints of foreshadowing. Best read I’ve had for a while! :)

Posted by kattu 2 years ago Report

Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it. The world building was a bit loose, with a lot of creative freedom here and there. I didn't give too much thought to why things are like that, but I tried to keep some consistency with the major players. And yes, I didn't want to simply have vore shoehorned in here, I wanted it to be somewhat integrated to the plot.

Posted by ArchLinux 2 years ago Report

lily digest someone in the story ?

Posted by kattu 2 years ago Report

No

Posted by ArchLinux 2 years ago Report

what happened whith that guy that she swallow to sabe gabi ? and what about karen ?

Posted by kattu 2 years ago Report

Lily spit him out and Gabi ate him. Karen doesn't eat anyone too.

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

this is by far my favorite depiction of gabi. this sereis pointed out how gabi constantly rationalizes mass murder . since she rationalizes it as , she had to keep her secret., or these people were bad guys, or even her flimsiest excuse she was embarassed. then when put in a scenario where she cant use any of the excuses, gabi and everyone around her has to come to terms with the monster that she is. heck even her influence as well, since it infected lily and meg.

but making gabi confront herself in a scenario where she truly didnt have to kill people , was great...