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Hey All you monster girl Lovers! got another one here. For this one I decided to try writing it from my Slime Girl's poV. She's got the grammer skills of a 4th grader, hence the misspellings through out. Hope you all enjoy though.
As always, please comment with likes/dislikes they help me know what I did right and what needs more work.
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Posted by thespyfurry69 4 years ago Report
Can I get a edited version (or at least a more grammatical one)
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 4 years ago Report
I can do one with the spellings fixed but if I correct too much of the Grammer, that will detract from the story being written by Mary. Is that ok?
Posted by thespyfurry69 4 years ago Report
Ok
Posted by thespyfurry69 4 years ago Report
I could just correct it myself (don’t worry about it)
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
I love the Phenetic spelling with my dyslexia it makes it fun to read. It also makes sense that Mary combined the names of Adam and Eve since slimes seem to be amorphous and genderless.
Posted by ThirtyCelcius 4 years ago Report
i dont think i wrote like this in 4th grade
Posted by harpylove 4 years ago Report
This is so cute! I love Mary.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 4 years ago Report
It just hit me while I was rereading the first story...Nate's Dad is with a fox girl, and a man and a fox girl appear as momentary customers in the first story!
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 4 years ago Report
Totally wasn’t planned while writing this. Realized it myself after I’d published this one. Good eye though, it might very well have been them.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 4 years ago Report
Funny how these things happen.
Posted by varulvsvetsare 4 years ago Report
i really like this anthology. very fun to read, but i guess there is some bias due to being a fan of the manga and anime.
Posted by thespyfurry69 3 years ago Report
uhh, do you mean Christ when it says magic joo ?
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 3 years ago Report
That was the intent, yes.
Posted by thespyfurry69 3 years ago Report
ok thanks